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He who talks to the dead Junior Member
since 2003-07-08
Posts 30Newport, United Kingdom |
The Gamer All my realities are fluid They've never stayed the same, I'm stuck in an Unreal World, I'm A Gamer who played the Game. My fingers fly across the 'board, I'm thinking far ahead, Probabilities, possibilities, what must be, So I Don't wind up dead. I take the pad, I wrap it up, I know what I must do, I have to keep my secret safe, And hidden well from you. Times, places, the open spaces, To which world do I belong? Can I straddle both like like a collossus? I'm a Gamer who can be wrong. A spirit calls me over, With something it needs to say, "cherish the moment, dont destroy it" I'm a Gamer at the end of the day. I've walked a million landscapes, Destroyed a million foes, I've seen the sights, Commanded Knights, And landed many blows, I cannot take much of it, I've shouldered all the blame, What more is there left to lose? I'm a Gamer, trapped and dieing in the Game. |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
Welcome to Passions. There are all sorts of games, all sorts of players. Choosing to always be a player in any of them is usually a good decision. Well done. Enjoy your time here within the blue pages. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Welcome to Passions! I enjoyed reading your introductory poem and look forward to reading more of your work and your responses to others in this family of poets. Please check your email for a special greeting... and enjoy! *S* suthern |
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He who talks to the dead Junior Member
since 2003-07-08
Posts 30Newport, United Kingdom |
Thanks Suthern, I enjoyed the picture, it suited the mood of the poem perfectly. |
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2dalimit Member Elite
since 2000-02-08
Posts 2228Mississippi coast |
I take the pad, I wrap it up, I know what I must do, I have to keep my secret safe, And hidden well from you. Enjoyed the read. We all have secrets others need never know. Thanks, Melton |
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wild irish Junior Member
since 2003-07-09
Posts 31 |
Stay in our world, I like it www.rateapoet.com |
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perseph1ne Junior Member
since 2003-07-09
Posts 16IL |
 I really understood this poem. It works well on different levels, but as a RPG player I liked the literal defeating foes and death that you do experiance in all RPGs. Nicely done, Perseph1ne |
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BrokenWingedAngel Member
since 2003-02-28
Posts 60 |
I've walked a million landscapes, Destroyed a million foes, I've seen the sights, Commanded Knights, And landed many blows, I cannot take much of it, I've shouldered all the blame, What more is there left to lose? Great babe  I knew you'd fit right in when nudged in the right direction. Your words send shivers down my spine.*waiting impatiently to see more * Always, BWA |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
"I've seen the sights, commanded knights." I like the flow of this. Welcome Joyce |
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He who talks to the dead Junior Member
since 2003-07-08
Posts 30Newport, United Kingdom |
@ Perseph1ne ~ Aye, I have spent the last 15 years more or less playing RPG's and it shows @ Angel ~ We shall see babe @ Joyce ~ Having re-read it a few times I have to say this is probably my favourite paragraph, it has a good rhythm to it Thanks to all who posted, appreciate it |
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