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pegasus111
Member Elite

since 2000-07-27

Posts 2219
ocala, fl, usa

0 posted 2003-07-05 07:28 AM

I would know you in the multitude
in the deepest corner of my soul

You are the light that warms my skin
in the clutch of winters’ chill

The gentle breeze that refreshes me
in the long burning summer heat

Your scent inflames my sleeping heart
your touch heals a lifetime of pain

Your face is like an Angel’s smile
blessing me with gifts of purest love

Before you, there was only an empty space
a hole in my world that could not be filled

Now, there is kindness, gentleness, and hope
that finally brings me peace.

the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost

junemac
Senior Member

since 2003-04-24

Posts 1005
uk

1 posted 2003-07-05 07:39 AM

oh this is very very good. its really beautiful.

hugs june xxxxxxxxx

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

2 posted 2003-07-05 09:40 AM

Before you, there was only an empty space
a hole in my world that could not be filled

Now, there is kindness, gentleness, and hope
that finally brings me peace.

And it is a rebirth, isn't it? *S* This is lovely, pegasus...!

Trillium

Member Patricius

since 2001-03-09

Posts 12098
Idaho, USA

3 posted 2003-07-05 01:04 PM

pegasus111: This is so lovely and I am hoping it is swritten from personal experience!

Betty Lou Hebert

TheGoalie
Junior Member

since 2003-06-15

Posts 47
Poughkeepsie, Ny/Long Island, Ny

4 posted 2003-07-06 04:35 AM

I'd like to say something that would help you make this poem flow nicer, or work better, but I can't. It's perfect the way it is. I loved it.

"Ain't Got no quarrels with God, ain't got no time to grow old. Lord knows I'm weak, won't somebody get me off of this reef"

2dalimit
Member Elite

since 2000-02-08

Posts 2228
Mississippi coast

5 posted 2003-07-06 02:17 PM

Point taken.

Very good write.
Thanks,
Melton

BrokenWingedAngel
Member

since 2003-02-28

Posts 60

6 posted 2003-07-07 09:21 PM

Pegasus, as always, your words are beautiful and flow so smoothly. I'm adding this to my library.

BWA

I awake to a world I don't want. There is no transition for me. I am in heaven. I am in hell.

Joyce Johnson

Member Rara Avis

since 2001-03-10

Posts 9912
Washington State

7 posted 2003-07-09 09:06 AM

This is beautiful. I am playing catch up. I have been away on vacation. Love, Joyce

wild irish
Junior Member

since 2003-07-09

Posts 31

8 posted 2003-07-09 01:35 PM

sounds lonely www.rateapoet.com

altoladybj
Member

since 2003-06-24

Posts 79
Pennsylvania

9 posted 2003-07-09 02:48 PM

Pegasus, I love this poem, so beautifully put, thanks for sharing it.

Beverly

missmisery61
Member

since 2003-07-08

Posts 56

10 posted 2003-07-09 03:22 PM

Pegasus, The first of your poems that I've had the pleasure of reading. I look forward to many more.

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