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aries_luv_ppl
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since 2001-09-20
Posts 1448
Universal Mind

0 posted 2003-06-22 11:59 PM


Ambiguous

When I'm out in the wind,
Someone hands me hot chocolate.
I know it will melt in my mouth,
Yet my heart hesitates.

Somewhere in my heart,
I feel I ought not
Be offered a drink.

Somewhere in my heart
Feel that I don't
Deserve good care.

Somewhere in my heart
Tells me not to trust-
Not to trust any man.

And here it comes...

The fairy tale,
That when men offer a drink,
Think twice cause
They may want more than a drink.

And when they offer a ride,
Never say yes,
Cause you never know
Where you're going to be end up.

While I'm out in the wind,
Someone is waiting for my hand
To pick up the cup in his hand.
And I
I say no to him.

Cause I don't feel safe,
Yet all I really want is his cup.

Side note: I want to be loved. Yet I don't feel anyone can love me. And I don't believe in men. What an ambiguous attitude towards love.

(c)June 22, 2003
Eliza Simmons

Eliza Simmons
~Every girl has a dream within.
~Yesterday insult, today gain.

© Copyright 2003 Eliza Simmons - All Rights Reserved
BloomingRose
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since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092
Florida
1 posted 2003-06-24 12:37 PM


Trusting is difficult, but if we take no chances then life can be very lonely and boring.
Risk are sometimes worth the gain.

Hugs,
Deb

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Member Patricius
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Idaho, USA
2 posted 2003-06-24 02:29 PM


Eliza:  Hopefully, you will always make the right decisions.  Learning to trust your instincts is difficult.

Betty Lou Hebert

2dalimit
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since 2000-02-08
Posts 2228
Mississippi coast
3 posted 2003-06-24 03:01 PM


Cause I don't feel safe,
Yet all I really want is his cup.


You're right to be cautious, but some men are Knights in shining armour. I wish you well.

Melton

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Member Rara Avis
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912
Washington State
4 posted 2003-06-24 07:10 PM


I think my dear you should hone your instincts.  Learn to read them. they may be feeling just as vulnerable as you do.Few  of them are very good actors.
My little two year old granddaughter was looking out the window the other day at a group of street workers in their hard hats.  She turned to her mother and said "I just love men."  I hope she learns to be selective as she grows older, but I think most men are just as nice as you expect them to be.  Love, Joyce  

midnightblues
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since 2000-07-01
Posts 1597
Singapore
5 posted 2003-06-24 11:41 PM


Dear Eliza,

u're in good hands... trust God to lead u along life's twisty pathways

Love
Michelle

If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues™

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