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aries_luv_ppl
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since 2001-09-20
Posts 1448
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0 posted 2003-06-17 08:46 PM


Wisdom Teeth

Smiling back at you, I said,
"Wisdom can roadblock of highway.
I am but a wisdom teech
That sitting in my mouth
Blocking toothbrush to come in.

So all the stuborn little thoughts,
All the things that were said be right,
I am unwilling to change
As new theory developed.

And all my thoughts, my analysis,
That I thought were objective,
They are but my own point of view,
Theories that only apply to one case.

And while the toothbrush want to
Inform me I need to be awaken,
I am unwilling to accept the truth...
I am unwilling to let the toothbrush in.

So now you know my story of
Highway mind-boggling drive.
This is but a reminder from me.
So now you know my story of
Wisdom teeth I won't lie to you,
I am so scared to have them taken out!

Side Note: I'm going to have wisdom teeth taken out on July 17, 2003. Four at one time.

(c)June 17, 2003
Eliza Simmons

Eliza Simmons
~Every girl has a dream within.
~Yesterday insult, today gain.

© Copyright 2003 Eliza Simmons - All Rights Reserved
kadafi09
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since 2003-06-17
Posts 143
California, United States
1 posted 2003-06-17 10:50 PM


i liked your poem. beautifully written. i very well understand your source for inspiration.
midnightblues
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since 2000-07-01
Posts 1597
Singapore
2 posted 2003-06-18 07:46 AM


Wow Eliza,

im still waiting for my wisdom teeth to grow and here u are waiting to have them taken out! teehee cute poem

Love
Michelle

If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues™

Joyce Johnson
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3 posted 2003-06-18 11:04 AM


Wisdom teeth.  I guess they are called that because you're older when they come in, but they seem to be the first teeth to be removed.  Anyway this is cute and you'll be fine.  Love, Joyce
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