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Trillium
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0 posted 2003-06-13 11:36 PM






Out of the Night

Up north, a mighty river flowed
And overhead, Aurora glowed.
Out in the midst of virgin land,
There lay a homestead.One man's hand
Had carefully brought it to life
And there, alone sometimes, his wife
Was often left to carry on
The daily chores, when he was gone.

One night, as she prepared to sleep,
She heard a voice call, rough and deep.
She started up, to listen for
Some footsteps coming to her door.
But nothing happened, so she lay
Just dozing off, when far away,
She could hear that someone spoke.
It didn't sound like neighbor folk.

But someone called; who could it be
At this late hour?She could see
No movement, anywhere nearby.
A quarter moon defined the sky.
She stood there watching, at the pane
And then the voice called once again.
A large bird swooped from tree to tree.
An owl is what it proved to be!

An owl, who prowled to look for prey
And frightened her in such a way.
She laughed at how she'd been mis-led
And climbed back in her cosy bed.
A tale to tell her family
Became part of her history!




Betty Lou Hebert


Published by Poet's Fantasy, 1999

[This message has been edited by Trillium (06-13-2003 11:38 PM).]

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1 posted 2003-06-14 05:05 AM


A lovelly tale Betty.  Love, Joyce
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2 posted 2003-06-14 10:01 AM


I can remember times I felt spooked only to find it was a small creature of the night..Thanks for bring the memory back, I enjoyed this.

Life is a story waiting to happen..Go on.... Create, Live and Love

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3 posted 2003-06-14 06:04 PM


this is a lovely tale and i love how this one flows and rhymes. really nice !

hugs from june xxxxxxxx

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4 posted 2003-06-14 10:34 PM


Joyce:  This happened to my mother when I was a baby. She was often alone for a couple of weeks at a time, on the homestead and it was very wild country.  Her name was "Ruth" and when she first heard this owl, she thought it sounded like someone calling her name. It worried her as she thought maybe someone who knew her, was hurt in the woods and calling for help. She was really relieved to see the big owl!

Betty Lou Hebert

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5 posted 2003-06-14 10:36 PM


kitkat:  It's always a relief when you can identify strange sounds you hear at night.
I heard wolves howling really early this morning, just before daylight.  Guess the full moon was getting to them! We don't often hear them anymore, so it was a treat!

Betty Lou Hebert

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6 posted 2003-06-14 10:39 PM


junemac:  Thanks for your remarks!  Do you have big owls where you are, like the great horned owl?  I'm not familiar with the types you have in Britain.

Betty Lou Hebert

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7 posted 2003-06-15 10:40 AM


Dear Betty,

i feel like i've just read an excerpt from a nice cosy farm-style story book... love the feeling!

Love
Michelle

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8 posted 2003-06-15 10:38 PM


Michelle:  Thanks and glad it pleased you!

Betty Lou Hebert

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9 posted 2003-07-03 03:10 AM


loved this story here!
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10 posted 2003-07-03 04:29 PM


Passing shadows:  Thanks for commenting!

Betty Lou Hebert

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