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midnightblues
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0 posted 2003-06-04 10:10 AM



a moment of silence
for the dead birdie lying by the roadside
how is it my heart goes out to it
when so many others don't care

an emotive moment
an old lady hobbles by
i wonder
why she's left filthy and alone

God has his reasons for making things happen
all the things that i see he teaches me to feel


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a short moment of pain a day...... makes us human ^_^

love
Michelle

If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues™

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1 posted 2003-06-04 11:14 AM


Blessed is the one with empathy.  She truly lives.  Joyce
NewEnglandlazurlu
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2 posted 2003-06-04 02:37 PM


A spectacular write, Michelle that I thoroughly enjoyed reading. It is sad that we must see such pain and suffering. I pray God will watch over those less fortunate.

Hugs to you ... Marti

junemac
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3 posted 2003-06-04 04:01 PM


thats beautiful and true michelle. i liked this very much.

hugs from june x

dr tung
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4 posted 2003-06-07 10:48 AM


you have heart.. =)
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5 posted 2003-06-07 10:50 AM


Lovely write. Chris

"Hope" is the thing with feathers-
that perches in the soul....
                  
                       -Emily Dickinson

cynicsRus
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6 posted 2003-06-07 12:55 PM


Michelle,
I really liked the correllation you drew here.
Nice write.
Thanks for sharing,

Sid

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7 posted 2003-06-07 01:52 PM


Compassion is our duty to fulfill...thank you for the reminder..

believe in what your heart feels...

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8 posted 2003-06-07 07:17 PM


Michelle~
Just a stirring piece of your heart~

'all the things that i see he teaches me to feel'

What a world of wisdom in that thought !
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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