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0 posted 2003-06-02 02:35 PM


lentement, la rose declose
une larme,
la perle sentimentale
qui glisse,
douce caresse d'un ongle
contre le rouge, bordeaux brute
lorsque leve le vent.

Un voile discret
balbutie contre le volet,
tandis que la brume,
laisse le soleil contourner.
Un murmure,
encore mou,
rattrappe la rosee,
qui s'envole,
ou cabriollent
les jais.

"more than yesterday, less than tomorrow, i love you"

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1 posted 2003-06-02 05:51 PM


I don't know what you're saying bu it is beautiful language.  Joyce
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2 posted 2003-06-03 09:16 AM


Joyce,
thank you for those words...I'm sorry you did not understand it and i suspect many won't but i just can't bring myself to translate it lol...

love,
claire xx

"more than yesterday, less than tomorrow, i love you"

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