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aries_luv_ppl
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0 posted 2003-05-25 06:35 PM


This is What I Dare You

From your pen, I know you have compassion.
And depression is but an emotion,
A state of mind where I have been.
Scared not to express yourself,
Dare to be vulnerable, for
For that's the only way to heal.
As for me, nothing worth more than honesty.
Be honest with your own feeling,
For you own them and no one else.
I once heard one needs to keep in touch
With ones feeling to know oneself.
And here is a safe guarded place,
For me and you to share a cup
Of tears of joy, sorrow and friendship.

(c)May 25, 2003
Eliza Simmons

Eliza Simmons
~Every girl has a dream within.
~Yesterday insult, today gain.

© Copyright 2003 Eliza Simmons - All Rights Reserved
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Member Patricius
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1 posted 2003-05-25 11:56 PM


Eliza:  This is lovely and shows what a caring heart you have.  Glad I got to read it.

Love
Betty Lou

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2 posted 2003-05-26 03:30 AM


beautiful
midnightblues
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3 posted 2003-05-26 11:54 AM


Dear Eliza,

I like this very much, gutsy and touching.

Love
Michelle

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4 posted 2003-05-26 07:02 PM


Eliza this is great.  Joyce
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