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aries_luv_ppl
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since 2001-09-20
Posts 1448
Universal Mind

0 posted 2003-05-12 06:00 PM


Tired of Counting

1...2...6...11... how many?
100... 105... 110... what!?
I'm tired of counting!
Apple, cucumber, and orange...
Every meal the same deal.

1...2...6...11... how many?
100... 105... 110... what!?
I'm overwhelming!
Accounting, Finance, and all others...
Textbooks and course code cloud over me

Stop counting, start falling...
110... 105... 100 what!?
11...6...2...1... how many?
Why my car is slowing down?
Or am I just counting sleeps?



Eliza Simmons
~Every girl has a dream within.
~Yesterday insult, today gain.


[This message has been edited by aries_luv_ppl (05-12-2003 06:03 PM).]

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Marilyn
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since 1999-09-26
Posts 2621
Ontario, Canada
1 posted 2003-05-13 06:24 PM


Good job..I get overwhelmed at times with all the numbers. Nice read thank you.

Marilyn

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
2 posted 2003-05-25 01:33 AM


yes!
midnightblues
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since 2000-07-01
Posts 1597
Singapore
3 posted 2003-05-25 12:13 PM


Dear Eliza,

I like this, its so cute! esp. the last stanza... sori that u had a problematic day...

Love
Michelle

If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues™

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