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ellie LeJeune
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0 posted 2001-05-15 06:53 AM


The birds are laughing
their joy to a new morning
singing hopes Spring song

A friend hears the song in my heart, and sings it to me when my memory fails.

© Copyright 2001 ellie LeJeune - All Rights Reserved
Dark Angel
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1 posted 2001-05-15 07:42 AM


sighhh, beautiful

enjoyed  

Maree

kitkat
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2 posted 2001-05-15 08:05 AM


Excellent Haiku

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You got to get up every morning with a smile on your face
and show the world all the love in your heart
Then people are gonna treat

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3 posted 2001-05-15 10:46 AM


Very pretty.  Joyce
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4 posted 2001-05-15 02:21 PM


I enjoy your Haiku's and this one was wonderful.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

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5 posted 2001-05-15 06:11 PM


Listening to the birds at 5:00a.m. is an uplifting experience.

Betty Lou Hebert

Denise
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6 posted 2001-05-16 08:21 PM


Very lovely, Ellie! One of the most beautiful sounds in the world!
kcsgrandma
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7 posted 2001-05-19 10:50 AM


The chickadees' cry of "sweet weather" is always one of the first things to give me hope for spring.  Very nice, Ellie.

To love another person is to see the face of God.
- Les Miserables

Marilyn

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singapore
8 posted 2001-05-25 12:32 PM


this really brought a smile to my face...i wonder if we can incorporate birds' chirping into our alarm clock system rather than that irriating buzzzz....

LOL

Honeybee
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9 posted 2001-05-27 10:57 AM



Ellie, very lovely!  

Take care,
Melissa~

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