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Summer Breeze

aries_luv_ppl
Senior Member

since 2001-09-20

Posts 1448
Universal Mind

0 posted 2003-05-03 07:15 PM

Summer Breeze

The cup is full, yet my heart is bare.
Coffee is hot, soon is calm by zephyr.

Summer breeze brings flowers to live,
Yet the wind is too warm to awake me.

Summer breeze brings hopes, yet my
Tears dance with waft, entwine with dust.

Summer sun seems so bright, yet so mild.
It marks changes, to rise and to fall.

Summer sun seems so nice, yet so dry.
It marks my emptiness, my desperate thirst.

Summer can you cast away my loneliness?
And color my world with fruits of all kinds?

I don’t know why I’m in distress, yet I
Yet I know its time to give thanks to love.

©May 3, 2003
Eliza Simmons

Eliza Simmons
~Every girl has a dream within.

Joyce Johnson

Member Rara Avis

since 2001-03-10

Posts 9912
Washington State

1 posted 2003-05-03 11:56 PM

Nicely done. Joyce

midnightblues
Senior Member

since 2000-07-01

Posts 1597
Singapore

2 posted 2003-05-04 03:35 AM

Dear Eliza,

that was a very nostalgic summer breeze, I like it

Love
Michelle

If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues™

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

3 posted 2003-05-26 03:33 AM

whish whoosh! nice!

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