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junemac Senior Member
since 2003-04-24
Posts 1005uk 
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Tangled threads of miscellaneous thought accumulated debris, Fragments of experience nostalgia in assembly. Hoarded away in layers of dust redundant and undisturbed, Are suddenly, surprisingly awoken and perturbed. Feelings and words are welling up and eddying to the surface, Forgotten dreams that i had lost now finally have their purpose. In its bid to be free my mind is secretly churning, Desperately seeking a way to express and a let out for its yearning I pick up my pen with sweet relief, the words come stuttering first, Then cascading fast and free quenching an inner thirst. Exhausted now but satisfied with a smile that says it all, I've finally found a let out i just let the words freefall |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
And how nicely they formed. Joyce |
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midnightblues Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 1597Singapore |
Very true indeed! Its amazing how you can put simple thoughts into a constructive piece like this Love Michelle If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues™ |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
June~ Truly amazing how the spill of ink is a comforting relief of feelings too long stored away~ Let it flow~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
junemac: I really enjoyed this poem. I know that feeling of having a lot to say, but can't quite seem to find the right beginning. Once you do, it's a joy to let the words flow! Betty Lou Hebert |
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aries_luv_ppl Senior Member
since 2001-09-20
Posts 1448Universal Mind |
this is cool Eliza Simmons |
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junemac Senior Member
since 2003-04-24
Posts 1005uk |
joyce. thank you for saying they formed nicely. i was hoping so :0) michelle thanks i liked the constructive comment. i like to think so. marge and betty, oh yes its wonderful to finally let the words freefall. this is a fairly recent occurance for me. eliza i like cool !!!! thanks. you are all so lovely to take the time to comment on my poem thanks. hugs from june x |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
wonderful! |
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aries_luv_ppl Senior Member
since 2001-09-20
Posts 1448Universal Mind |
Wow, now I can breath. Thanks. This is good. Eliza Simmons |
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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
Positively glorious...wonderful feeling, isn't it? Hugs, Ellie A friend hears the song in my heart, and sings it to me when my memory fails. |
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