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wings of the moon
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0 posted 2003-04-26 07:13 AM


one, to be or not alone,
with childish games
where the mind is true home.

She sleeps, so quiet and calm,
a slight flutter of wind  
would bring her no harm

for, imagination will always protect
and make the unrest
colour pinkly along.

She rests as the song,  
lifted clear through the air
does wink at the moon.

Look back and do stare!

"more than yesterday, less than tomorrow, i love you"

© Copyright 2003 Claire Lucille - All Rights Reserved
garysgirl
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1 posted 2003-04-26 07:21 AM


Claire, this is a very pretty poem. I
love poems about the moon. It's very peaceful
and calming to me. I enjoyed reading this one, too.
Hugs,
Ethel

wings of the moon
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2 posted 2003-04-26 07:25 AM


Thank you Ethel for your kind words,
I am glad you enjoyed it...
love,
Claire

"more than yesterday, less than tomorrow, i love you"

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3 posted 2003-04-26 08:20 AM


Claire~

'imagination will always protect
and make the unrest
colour pinkly along'


I LOVE the thought of 'pinkly'~

Lovely write ..~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

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midnightblues
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4 posted 2003-04-26 09:16 AM


Dear Claire,

very nice moonie poem ^_^

Love
Michelle

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wings of the moon
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5 posted 2003-04-26 11:44 AM


Dear Marge,
Thank you, I like the idea of doing something pinkly too

"more than yesterday, less than tomorrow, i love you"

wings of the moon
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6 posted 2003-04-26 11:45 AM


Thank you midnight blues for your reply
love,
Claire

"more than yesterday, less than tomorrow, i love you"

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7 posted 2003-04-29 06:37 PM


nice

Eliza Simmons
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8 posted 2003-05-04 12:35 PM


thanks eliza
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