Determination is Inborn in Me

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aries_luv_ppl
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since 2001-09-20

Posts 1448
Universal Mind

0 posted 2003-04-25 04:34 PM

Determination is Inborn in Me

Determination is a gift for me;
Discipline is inborn in me.
Nothing is too hard I find
When I think of my parents' load.
They have to work, study, and keep the house.
They do all this for me to learn.
I as their daughter shall inherit their gifts
Of determination, will and discipline.
All are inborn in me and all I can have.
Determination is a gift for me;
Discipline is inborn in me.

Determination is a gift for me,
Discipline is inborn in me.
And if I find myself running away,
I will use my discipline and will
To cast the impossible away,
With this song imprinted in my mind,
"I can do it, all are but small tasks."
Determination is a gift for me;
Discipline is inborn in me.

I can do it, all are but small tasks.
I can do it, all are but small tasks.
I can do it, determination is all I need.
And I... I have determination and the will
They are inborn in me from the day I was conceived.
Determination is a gift for me;
Discipline is inborn in me.
Determination is a gift for me;
Discipline is inborn in me.

(c)April 25, 2003
Eliza Simmons

//please comment on it. I mean critique it. This is a little song which I will record to my computer and play it everyday to myself. LOL. Haven't think of a tune yet.

Eliza Simmons
~Every girl has a dream within.

midnightblues
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since 2000-07-01

Posts 1597
Singapore

1 posted 2003-04-26 09:14 AM

Dear Eliza,

this is very encouraging yah ^_^ if i were to create a tune for this, it'll be a little gospel style... juz a comment

Love
Michelle

If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues™

aries_luv_ppl
Senior Member

since 2001-09-20

Posts 1448
Universal Mind

2 posted 2003-04-26 01:23 PM

thanks, since I'm not a musician, I will read the song/poem as the beat goes and record it. If you like it I can send u a copy, but u know my poor pronounation may interfere with your listening.

Eliza Simmons
~Every girl has a dream within.

midnightblues
Senior Member

since 2000-07-01

Posts 1597
Singapore

3 posted 2003-04-26 03:29 PM

Dear Eliza,

I'll just read ur poem as I listen, it can't be that bad my dear, coz I've got great imagination!

Many Hugs
Michelle

If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues™

Joyce Johnson

Member Rara Avis

since 2001-03-10

Posts 9912
Washington State

4 posted 2003-04-26 08:00 PM

This is a determined well disciplined poem. Love, Joyce

Trillium

Member Patricius

since 2001-03-09

Posts 12098
Idaho, USA

5 posted 2003-04-27 08:56 PM

Eliza: I like this and your attitude! Great idea to read it every day for strenthening your resolve!

Betty Lou Hebert

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