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IcyFlamez89
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since 2003-02-14
Posts 292
Jersey City NJ

0 posted 2003-04-22 03:37 PM


Who am I?
A dream that hasn't woken,
Or a reality that seems to fade?
Come...I'll show you.
Gaze into my eyes.
you'll see the answer.
Touch my heart if
you wish to feel it instead.
It matters not,
for both is dark,
no soul, no warmth, no peace.
Who am I?
One without the things that
make us human.
Am I even human?
maybe, maybe not...

But this I am:
the bitter Artic winds made
to flesh.
Child of the night
who has fallen deep.
Deep into the void.
Every word I speak drains the
joy around.
No one leaves me happy,
All come out in gloom,
And some...can never leave at all...

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Marge Tindal
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1 posted 2003-04-28 08:27 AM


George~
Well ..... time for this 'dark beauty' to see the light~

Enjoyed reading your poetic thoughts~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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midnightblues
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since 2000-07-01
Posts 1597
Singapore
2 posted 2003-04-28 10:57 AM


Wow! Very, very interesting!

Love
Michelle

If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues™

JP
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since 1999-05-25
Posts 1343
Loomis, CA
3 posted 2003-04-28 11:37 AM


quote:
But this I am:
the bitter Artic winds made
to flesh.


Awesome write my friend!

Yesterday is ash, tomorrow is smoke; only today does the fire burn.
Nil Desperandum, Fata viem invenient

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