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aries_luv_ppl
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0 posted 2003-10-03 05:43 PM


Peace With You

The Sun gives its last radiance.
Moon is rising to horizon.
Never give up, cause morn is near.
Another day soon will pass.

Owl is hollowing, yet don't be scared.
I will be there, as long as you live.
Death isn't frighten; it's a release.
A release from suffering in life.

The clock is counting, every second,
Yet don't be afraid, I'll always pray
Till long after dust entwine with you.
Don't worry, Our Lord, will give good care.

Let's the stars of angels sing,
A hymn in comfort your pain.
Let's my voices smooth your vein,
Softly touching your hair.

The Sun gives its last radiance.
Moon is rising to horizon.
Never give up, cause morn is near.
Another day soon will pass.

Owl is hollowing, yet don't be scared.
I will be there, as long as you live.
Death isn't frighten; it's a release.
A release from suffering in life.

I will be there, soon after you're gone.
Wait for me there, friends last forever.
Heavenly Father please be our witness.
Someday, we will be together.

(c)Aug 28, 2003
Eliza Simmons

Eliza Simmons
~Every girl has a dream within.
~Yesterday insult, today gain.

© Copyright 2003 Eliza Simmons - All Rights Reserved
Mistletoe Angel
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1 posted 2003-10-03 11:27 PM




(big hugggssssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, this is beautiful and when the time is right, we will all unite with Him always for He is our Father and we are all His sons and daughters! (smiles) This is a most beautiful declaration of faith, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Eliza, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

Joyce Johnson
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2 posted 2003-10-11 12:56 PM


Very poignant, my little Aries.  I hope death does not touch you in any way for a long, long time.  Love, Joyce
junemac
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3 posted 2003-10-11 04:03 PM


missed your thoughts and words eliza, this one is lovely too.

hugs june x

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4 posted 2003-10-11 07:02 PM


Eliza:  Very haunting poem!  Hope you are well!

Betty Lou Hebert

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5 posted 2003-10-23 04:20 AM


just beautiful!
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