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BrokenWingedAngel
Member

since 2003-02-28

Posts 60

0 posted 2003-04-13 01:44 AM

Some things, once lost
Can never be found again
Some bridges, when crossed
Are lost forever to men

Some roads once walked
Disappear from the path of life
And some words used in talk
Can cause endless strife

Some things, once written
Can never be erased
Some actions, when taken
Will start an endless race

Choices are layed before us
Each and every day
Right or wrong, its your decisions
That forms your life in its own way.

I awake to a world I don't want. There is no transition for me. I am in heaven. I am in hell.

:p oops, thanks for showing me the typo

[This message has been edited by BrokenWingedAngel (04-13-2003 07:31 PM).]

Wesley the Blue
Member

since 1999-09-02

Posts 426
Forest Lake, MN, USA

1 posted 2003-04-13 03:11 AM

It is true that once we pass a moment, we cannot go back. We can only learn from our past choices and hope that we never forget the lessons we learn. Wonderful poem.

KWM

Joyce Johnson

Member Rara Avis

since 2001-03-10

Posts 9912
Washington State

2 posted 2003-04-13 03:35 AM

So right. You do have a typo. I think you mean actions taken. Joyce

aries_luv_ppl
Senior Member

since 2001-09-20

Posts 1448
Universal Mind

3 posted 2003-04-13 12:16 PM

I love this deary...esp first three stanze...they alone can be a poem. It is self explained. The last stanze, I like it less.

Thanks for sharing!

Eliza Simmons
~Every girl has a dream within.

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

4 posted 2003-04-13 02:12 PM

BrokenWingedAngel~
Wisdom spoken so poetically beautifully~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

Trillium

Member Patricius

since 2001-03-09

Posts 12098
Idaho, USA

5 posted 2003-04-13 02:25 PM

BrokenWingedAngel: I enjoyed your poem and will look for more of your work.

Betty Lou Hebert

SPIRIT
Senior Member

since 2002-12-29

Posts 1745
California Desert

6 posted 2003-04-14 12:22 PM

Your words are well worth reading.

Solstice Son
Member

since 2000-09-19

Posts 469

7 posted 2003-04-15 11:05 AM

- smiling -

good poem Hun...REALLY good *G*

" and I dream of her always,
even when I don't dream.
her name's on my tongue
and her blood's in my stream."

'Christmas in Prison' John Prine

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