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Gypsy
Junior Member

since 2001-06-15

Posts 20
VA Coast

0 posted 2001-07-01 01:53 AM

I'm floating
with a map of the world
underneath my feet.

My weightlessness has just begun.

As if I'm changing...
and the solid body I'm containing
is only now reaching some liquid state.

Transparent from the ocean waves
forming
rapidly below
This new world is painted in a thousand colors-
reflecting the clouds hidden way above.

I feel this presence
overcoming
and absorbing

Somewhat similiar to the sugar in my coffee
every morning...
the routine;
a simple reminder
of the chaos i sacrificed,
while sinking in the melting sun
of Then.

I've reached a new moment.
A new distance
Suddenly
Simply
LIVING
Inside this grander scale.
As I soar higher,
I briefly touch the future
and know the pattern that is emerging.

To be great is to be misunderstood. Emerson

Trillium

Member Patricius

since 2001-03-09

Posts 12098
Idaho, USA

1 posted 2001-07-01 01:40 PM

This sounds like a wonderful experience. Especially to see the pattern of the future!

Betty Lou Hebert

rich-pa
Member

since 2000-02-07

Posts 317
New Orleans, Louisiana

2 posted 2001-07-01 04:00 PM

i really really enjoyed this, it has a good form to it and the subject matter was deeper than most people choose to go around here, bravo, i dug it.

"freedom is just another word for nothing left to lose..." -janis joplin

Munda
Member Elite

since 1999-10-08

Posts 3544
The Hague, The Netherlands

3 posted 2001-07-04 06:12 PM

I just love that finishing stanza! Great!

2dalimit
Member Elite

since 2000-02-08

Posts 2228
Mississippi coast

4 posted 2001-07-06 09:36 AM

Thank you for this journey of new enlightenment. A good read and presented very well.

Melton

Temptress

Moderator

Member Rara Avis

since 1999-06-15

Posts 7136
Mobile, AL

5 posted 2001-07-08 05:30 AM

OMG!

I haven't told you I love this yet?

I've read it! I can assure you of that, girl!

Gypsy
Junior Member

since 2001-06-15

Posts 20
VA Coast

6 posted 2001-07-12 01:33 PM

thanks all of you, you make me feel so good...sorry i haven't replied but i have been out of town and away from my computer.
thanks again

To be great is to be misunderstood. Emerson

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