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Packratmike Senior Member
since 2001-02-25
Posts 632California, USA 
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your words flow sweetly dripping with candy coated tact i listen trying to understand waiting for the sugar to melt pardon me.... but did you just break my heart? |
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Trillium 
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
I do hope not! We don't want anything to interfere with your writing! Betty Lou Hebert |
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Packratmike Senior Member
since 2001-02-25
Posts 632California, USA |
Don't worry, Betty...just a fantasy on being let down easy.*S* (It seems to me though, that I have visited this situation a couple of times in my life.) Mike |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
She sounds like she has the letting down easy art perfected. Very well put. Joyce p |
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Songbird Member Elite
since 1999-12-15
Posts 2184Missouri |
I like and understand this one very well. Very nicely written. |
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Packratmike Senior Member
since 2001-02-25
Posts 632California, USA |
Joyce...thank you. She has it mastered. The heart has been broken before the mind completely realizes it.*S* Songbird...thank you. We all at some time have been let down by someone we cared for. Some do it quite brutally. Some do it softly and sweetly, with great care. They both hurt. Glad you liked this one.*S* Mike |
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Panne447 Member
since 2001-04-03
Posts 196S.A. TX |
Mike, This is terrific. I am so glad I came in to say hi - been absent for half of April and all of May - good to see you are still in top form. Panne |
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Packratmike Senior Member
since 2001-02-25
Posts 632California, USA |
Panne, my friend.....where've you been...hope everything is ok with you. Good to see you back and thanks for the comment. (btw, I think I have a couple of new pantoums floating around here somewhere.LOL) Mike |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very good, Mike! I enjoyed this very much. You've portrayed so well the impact of the pain with so few words. Excellent! |
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Packratmike Senior Member
since 2001-02-25
Posts 632California, USA |
Thank you, Denise. I've been there a couple of times.*S* Mike |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
I like this, Mike.  I love the tone you say things in. still d-i-s-c-o-n-n-e-c-t-e-d |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
ooh Excellent, excellent! I liked very much Maree |
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Packratmike Senior Member
since 2001-02-25
Posts 632California, USA |
Temptress...thank you, glad you enjoyed this. You got me wondering about my tone though.*S* Maree...this is one I was 100% happy with when I completed it. All the words seemed to fall right into place for me. Glad you liked it. Thank you.*S* Mike |
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mistyrose Member
since 2001-04-21
Posts 75state of anxiety |
packratmike..... dont know how i missed this one before..but i did until now glad i found it terrific timing i think this just happened to me you describe this so well if i had to write this now it would have one word "hell" thanks again for sharing mistyrose~* |
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Packratmike Senior Member
since 2001-02-25
Posts 632California, USA |
Hi mistyrose.... Sorry I missed your comment until now. I've been offline a few days with computer problems. Regarding the poem, I think we all have experienced this at some time or another. The words seem to hit our ears but their meaning doesn't really sink in right at the moment...(or we don't want it to.) Glad you enjoyed and I hope things turn out ok with you.*S* Mike |
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