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Joyce Johnson
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0 posted 2003-03-02 11:21 AM


Love Lives

When love is new, love is pure joy,
No blemish seen on girl or boy.
As love matures, fault lines appear
In one who was love's perfect dear.
Unless ignored, before love knows
This love is marred by feet of crows.
A love to stay throughout the years,
Must recognize, love perseveres

By Joyce 03/02/03

© Copyright 2003 Joyce I Johnson - All Rights Reserved
Marge Tindal
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1 posted 2003-03-02 12:01 PM


Joyce~
Oh my !  Oh my !
touching~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com                        

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2 posted 2003-03-02 01:42 PM


Ahhh, but Joyce...I thought they were only laugh lines. lol.  Enjoyed. Chris

"Hope" is the thing with feathers-
that perches in the soul....
                  
                       -Emily Dickinson

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3 posted 2003-03-02 05:35 PM


oh all so true, Joyce.

~Every girl has a dream within.

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4 posted 2003-03-02 11:58 PM


Joyce:  I enjoyed this poem and of course, it is all too true!

Betty Lou Hebert

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5 posted 2003-03-04 01:18 AM


Joyce, this is great! So very true indeed.  Thanks for sharing.
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6 posted 2003-03-05 11:03 PM


a tight, clever piece Joyce. you still have a wonderful touch. Bravo!

the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost



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7 posted 2003-03-15 12:30 PM


This is a great write. I enjoyed.
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8 posted 2003-03-15 04:08 PM


Enjoyed...James
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