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Marge Tindal
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0 posted 2003-02-24 01:28 PM



Poetic-Poots
~*Marge Tindal*~

Though we try to deny it
It happens every day …
Poetic-Poots …gone forever
Wonder why it happens that way ?

Miniscule thoughts escape
Exploding into thin air
I just passed one or two
And do you think I care ?

If only they had an odiferous quality
We could track ‘em down and slam ‘em into our ink
Then we could be famous for
Poetry that REALLY stinks~

*Yeah, well I know some think my work ‘stinks’ …
but this time I’m laughing my little 'poetic-poot' off~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Justbleu
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1 posted 2003-02-24 01:52 PM


This is cute....and WHOM MAY I ASK THINKS YOUR WORK STINKS?????

Anywayz, It's nice to be hanging around in here....and seeing friends like you!!!

HUGS,
Bridgette


"Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again.  To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown

[This message has been edited by Justbleu (02-24-2003 01:53 PM).]

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2 posted 2003-02-24 01:54 PM


Marge--Smiling here, but not with my nose, my poetry smells okay, but not my prose.  

PS...too cute!

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3 posted 2003-02-24 02:12 PM


MizBridgetteBleu~
So nice to see you hanging around in the Pub~
Thank you for 'touching'~

MartiSis~
Love your little 'poot' of inspire~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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4 posted 2003-02-24 02:55 PM


Dear Marge:  I can't imagine anyone thinking your poetry "stinks"!  Maybe it smells like roses, but certainly nothing of a lesser scent! I would compare it to rare perfume! This one is very clever!

Love
Betty Lou

Betty Lou Hebert

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5 posted 2003-02-25 01:43 AM


Youare just full of surprises.  Thanks for the giggle.  joyce
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6 posted 2003-02-25 05:08 AM




I know exactly how you feel.  I remember when I first posted here.  So many of my poems were emotional brainfarts, lol.  

"If my fate is to die, I must simply laugh"
-- Magus
"there is no good and evil, there are just sides."
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7 posted 2003-02-25 01:42 PM


now I believe I've heard just about everything...grinning wildly...can't wait to see the look on the faces of my family when I spring this one on 'em!

but yes'm. I completely understood this.




Marge Tindal
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8 posted 2003-02-25 09:42 PM


HeyFriends~
Thanks for all the grins~
Glad you got a chuckle outta this one~
It tickled my *giggle-schmiggle* too~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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