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SPIRIT
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since 2002-12-29
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California Desert

0 posted 2003-02-24 10:13 AM



LONGER THAN FOREVER

You are my friend,
You have my laughter,
And also, my tears,
I offer my hand in need.
I am a haven for your fears
And a temple
For your triumphs.
I am your friend
Until the day I die,
And even after death,
When I am but a sigh
On the passing wind,
A memory gone by.

You are my lover,
My life, my love.
I feel you
Every minute of every day,
Even when distance parts us.
In the depth of my heart,
Of my soul, of my being,
From me,
You are never apart.
In my life,
You have planted
Flowers - on stony ground,
Where never before
Blossoms ever found
A place - to bloom.

Even now, alone,
In my darkened room,
I kiss you.
I shall love you - forever
Until the day I die,
As a friend
As a lover,
And even after death
When I am - but a sigh
On the passing wind,
A memory gone by.

I be me BUT who does me be?

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1 posted 2003-02-24 03:10 PM


SPIRIT:  What a beautiful write!  I love the sentiments expressed and how you have expressed them!

Betty Lou Hebert

Marge Tindal
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2 posted 2003-02-24 06:52 PM


SPIRIT~

'I shall love you - forever
Until the day I die,
As a friend
As a lover,
And even after death
When I am - but a sigh
On the passing wind,
A memory gone by.'


I am ... but a *sigh* of satisfaction after reading these tender thoughts~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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3 posted 2003-02-25 01:33 AM


Loving, loving words.  Joyce
Marge Tindal
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4 posted 2003-02-25 09:36 PM


SPIRIT~
Honestly .... came back in for another *sigh*~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com                        

Flower
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since 2003-03-15
Posts 240
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5 posted 2003-03-18 01:49 PM


This seems to be such a gentle write, I liked the words all of them but this phrase in particular - visions of eternal love - nice.

"And even after death
When I am - but a sigh
On the passing wind,
A memory gone by."

Love reading all these great writes.
I write not!

bestgirl911
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6 posted 2003-03-18 07:05 PM


SPIRIT-

This is beautiful...I have to *sigh* with Marge.(and chuckle a little that she came back to sigh again... oh, to only have a love like that....

Best

aries_luv_ppl
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Universal Mind
7 posted 2003-03-18 07:13 PM


this is beautiful:

Like Marge I love the following lines:

"I am your friend
Until the day I die,
And even after death,
When I am but a sigh
On the passing wind,
A memory gone by."

Eliza Simmons
~Every girl has a dream within.

SPIRIT
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8 posted 2003-03-18 07:15 PM


Thank you all, it was written for a very special person in my life many years ago.
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