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Street Heart
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0 posted 2003-02-23 03:09 PM


Sense of foreboding
Good intentions imploding
Essential the Rapture
   escaping disaster
      of unknown capture

Elevated airs belie selfish natures
   segragating "Us" from all of "Them"
It is "Us" that we are..."We"-
   as a whole that I can see
What is the price of bigotry-
   to kill and maim?

What are we ignoring?
   That peace instead of warring
      would give us time to know
         that we are all the same
But in "Their" eyes the knives are thrusting
   and never see that "They" are busting
      "Theirs" AND "Ours"
BOTH are losing the same game!        


If a man has not discovered something he is willing to die for,his life is not worth living.

Martin Luther King,Jr. Detroit,1963

[This message has been edited by Street Heart (02-24-2003 10:19 AM).]

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Joyce Johnson
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1 posted 2003-02-23 03:20 PM


This poem says it as it is.  If we only took the time to know each other.  Joyce
fractal007
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2 posted 2003-02-23 05:01 PM


Cool poem.  I like your signature too.

"If my fate is to die, I must simply laugh"
-- Magus
"there is no good and evil, there are just sides."
-- Local Parasite

NewEnglandlazurlu
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3 posted 2003-02-23 07:16 PM


BRAVO!!!!!

There is nothing I can add to your words and thoughts.

Fabulous write ... Marti

Dwelling on the negative simply
contributes to its power.   
Shirley MacLaine

allan
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4 posted 2003-02-23 08:13 PM


Excellent write Street Heart. At the moment Saddam is completely contained. The peaceful nutralisation of his influence is ongoing. The Iraqi refugees here in the UK are saying that if we feed the people and make them strong again THEY will overpower this tyrant. They don't want Iraq taken back to the stone age - so many innocent children would suffer both from the trauma of the bombing and from the shortages. I applaud your understanding. If we demonise people and only strike out in a generalised and hate-filled way I truly believe we will only create more of the same.
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5 posted 2003-02-24 03:04 PM


Street Heart:  A very thought provoking write.  Well done!

Betty Lou Hebert

Street Heart
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6 posted 2003-02-26 03:39 PM


Thank you all.I actually wrote this over ten years ago.I did change a few things,though...
but not so much that it became another poem.
I never really understood the hate that so many people live in or with.There is a very good book that I acquired several years back,entitled,"Forgive And Forget".In it,it states that forgiveness is a process that is ongoing,something that needs to be consciously and regularly worked on,and that
unforgiveness does more damage on the one who possesses it than it does on the ones that it is focused on.Very interesting.....
and,more importantly,...imperative,in mine
and others opinion.I most certainly do have many stories that I wish to convey to you...
here on "Passions".It's funny...the word,"passion" holds such an incredibly strong affection and poignancy to me.I did feel that this poem did not have enough to say and that their needed to be MORE passion
in there Be-that-as-it-may,I hope that you realize that I do not hold bigotry in my Heart.Agape,is the Lord's "Unconditional LOVE".
Who are we to not abide by the same Loving
rules and learn to respect other's souls and feelings....even their possible opposing opinions.Not understanding,but the mere act of trying to understand,itself,could most certainly be used in the definition of Love, if not called "Love", itself.
   I hate war...and will not be silent about
it...I only wish that there were more that I could do to about it,though...

GOD be with us

Peace,Geoffrey  

If a man has not discovered something he is willing to die for,his life is not worth living.

Martin Luther King,Jr. Detroit,1963

[This message has been edited by Street Heart (02-26-2003 05:18 PM).]

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