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Lisa
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Lunenburg,VT USA

0 posted 2001-06-25 08:41 AM



The Sun's not up
But I creep out of bed
Take a quick shower
And wet my head

Dressed in a hurry
Loose, cool clothes
It may be hot
And the bugs in droves

Race to the garden
For a can of worms
Grab my pole
Down the road I turn

Down to the creek
The sky starts to light
Put the worm on the hook
My line is in flight

Here comes the sun
The sy's getting pink
I'll soon have some fish
in my kitchen sink

I sit back and sigh
What a peaceful time
Fishing a dawn
Watch the cork on my line

As it bobs up and down
To an unseen breeze
Wait for the bite
Just the dawn and me


© Copyright 2001 Lisa M. Fisher - All Rights Reserved
Joyce Johnson
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1 posted 2001-06-25 10:28 AM


A lovely relaxing poem.  I really like this.  Welcome to our corner. Joyce

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Member Patricius
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Idaho, USA
2 posted 2001-06-25 11:56 PM


I used to fish a lot and dawn was a favorite time.  Also late evening.  Didn't catch nearly as many fish as I wanted to though!

Betty Lou Hebert

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since 1999-08-04
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3 posted 2001-06-26 05:55 AM


awww this is sooo nice, I love fishing. Can't wait for the summer yeah!

enjoyed, thank you  

Maree

Titia Geertman
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since 2001-05-07
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Netherlands
4 posted 2001-06-26 06:02 PM


Amazing Lisa, you did a great job in describing me (LOL)
I think at dawn the earth is born again each day.

Thanks for this lovely poem.

Titia

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2dalimit
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since 2000-02-08
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Mississippi coast
5 posted 2001-06-27 06:35 AM


Lisa,
You have captured the perfect day off. I hardly ever fish with a rod and reel (commercial fishing was a large part of my past), but many do. You make it sound very restful.

Melton

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