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Joyce Johnson
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0 posted 2003-02-13 02:23 AM


War Evermore

As a small child I lived in peace
Of knowing that war was no more.
My future had been well insured
By the war that would end all war.

Mine is the last generation
That grew up without fear of war.
For since that time it seems to me
We have been warring more and more.

My brothers went into battles
To defeat Hitler and his crew
And then Korea and Viet Nam
For reasons that few of us knew.

There was the one called Desert Sand
Now we have to finish that war.
There's always one more war to fight
And after that there'll be more.

Man surely has not traveled far
From the time condemmed as savage.
We use our advanced minds to plan,
Lethal ways the earth to ravage.

Joyce 2/12/03

[This message has been edited by Joyce Johnson (02-13-2003 02:25 AM).]

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Nightshade
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1 posted 2003-02-13 09:55 AM


Excellent write! You are so correct in saying that it seems there has been war going on continually. When will we ever learn? Too late I suppose. Chris

"Hope" is the thing with feathers-
that perches in the soul....
                  
                       -Emily Dickinson

allan
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2 posted 2003-02-13 02:14 PM


Amen Joyce, Amen. Excellent write!
A. L. Becker
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3 posted 2003-02-13 03:02 PM


so true, Joyce!
ellie LeJeune
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4 posted 2003-02-15 07:09 AM


Sad and so true, Joyce...beautifully written as always...Hugs, Ellie

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5 posted 2003-02-15 07:40 PM


Joyce,

I can't envision a world without war. I guess as long as human beings are a "renewable resource" and the things we fight over are not, i.e. oil, land, money, religion, we will always have war in one form or another.
Although, it would be nice to envision a world without it.

Nonetheless, your words ring true.

coyote

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Thomas Carlyle

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6 posted 2003-02-16 03:05 PM


Joyce:  Very sad but true!

Betty Lou Hebert

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7 posted 2003-02-16 03:09 PM


Joyce~
A very thoughtful write, my friend~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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8 posted 2003-02-20 12:57 PM


stunning!
JamesMichael
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9 posted 2003-02-27 05:11 PM


Unfortunately it seems like mankind always has new weapons and reasons to kill...James
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10 posted 2003-02-28 07:54 PM


thoughtful write...enjoyed

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11 posted 2003-03-05 11:20 PM


it would seem that we are doomed to repeat our mistakes. Another example of imperfect beings in an imperfect world. there has to be something better.

the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost



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12 posted 2003-03-06 02:40 AM


One of my teachers once told me that life teaches us the same lesson again and again until we learn it, and then life presents us with a new lesson.  What a wondeful poem about the world not learning its lesson and being taught again.  I hope we learn it this time.

"Get busy living, or get busy dying.  Thats damn right!"  ~Shawshank Redemption

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13 posted 2003-03-06 09:33 AM


Joyce, this piece hit the nail on the head. I found it sad, true, and well written.  
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