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weffi
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0 posted 2003-01-27 07:58 PM



hey tell me what you think!
(it was published for the first time!!!!!go 2 www.cowgirlscountry.com and poetry for a look!)

Gently the sun prises apart the mist
A scattered mob of brumbies receive her kiss
Bathing the mountaintop in a golden glow
That awakens the bushmen in the valley below.

Hark! Hear the stockwhips cracking
The fiery stockhorses, no courage lacking
For what is a stockhorse if it is afraid?
And they set off excitedly on their brumby raid.

The brumbies stir, standing as one
Poised, alert they are ready to run
Approaching shod hooves, still nothing in sight,
The brumbies quiver, but still they stand tight.

The motionless brumbies abruptly take to their heels
From the bush to the left suddenly peals
A shout, a crack, a flurry of hooves
At first nothing stirred - now everything moves!

The peaceful bush is rudely interrupted
By the panic-stricken brumbies - her slumber corrupted
Then by the shouting bushmen pursuing the mob
She starts, then realizes - it’s only their job.

Through clumps of wattle, ironbark and gum,
In air now warm and seeming to hum
The brumbies are pursued by men wanting a chase,
With the heady excitement of the furious race.


One rider draws ahead of the mob
Rebellious yearlings try charging away to The Knob
A crack over the rump sends them back to the rest
The stockman lays his whip about to send them West.

Finally, the stockyards appear
Seeming to fill the brumbies with fear
But they are going too fast to check their pace,
And as the rebelling ends, so does the race.

Once they are in, the sorting commences,
“That one’s no good - he wrecked all the fences!”
Or “That young filly will be worth something when broken -
Wasn’t her dam an escapee from Logan?”

The stallion, the mares with young foals are released
The others to be sold or broken in - to say the least!
A few young horses escape with the others
After being branded, gelded and separated from their mothers.

Bewildered, they mill around outside the yards
Until the men disperse them with curses - and hard!
Then they race away to the east, relieved to be free,
Until a cloud of dust is all there is to see.

Slowly, the sun begins to sink in the West
Shining on the yarded brumbies, in their well deserved rest
As well as on the men making their way home,
And on the brumbies who still the bush own.


Steph Himsley July 2002

;P

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1 posted 2003-01-27 10:24 PM


weffi:  Welcome to Passions and what a fine introduction!  Congratulations on getting this one published.  It has the flavor Lawson and Paterson come to mind.  I loved it!

Betty Lou Hebert

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2 posted 2003-01-28 12:39 PM


I didn't know what brumbies were and I thought they were driving cattle.  Until the last few verses.  Very exciting.  Is this in Australia?  Welcome to this corner.Joyce
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3 posted 2003-01-28 07:04 AM



Steph...are you going to be our poet lariat?  Welcome to Passions!  I'm going to enjoy watching you as your share your talents with us!

Karilea
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SPIRIT
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4 posted 2003-01-28 09:52 AM


I am so impressed - brilliant!!!!!!!!!!
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5 posted 2003-01-28 02:02 PM


Steph,

I really enjoyed this. Welcome to Pip. I hope you enjoy being here as much as I know we will enjoy having you. Please check your e mail for a special greeting

                                   Dawn

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