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akira
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since 2002-07-13
Posts 79
Idaho

0 posted 2003-01-09 03:26 PM



Your telling me your going to die
Your asking me to say goodbye
To not cry a single tear
Do you know how terrifed I am
I cant live this life with out you
I dont want to even try
You've been my bset friend for so long
You were the one who stood by me
When I had no one to turn to
Your telling me not to cry
Your telling me to say goodbye
I cant let you go
I know this is hurting you
And oh how I wish I could stop the pain
You are everything I wish I could be
Your the mother I never had
No matter what you were always there
At my wedding when I had no money
You took care of what i couldnt
And now I cant believe your telling me
That your giving up, that your letting go
Why...I know how life has hurt you
But dont you see how much I need you
This is tearing me apart
I never thought my heart could hurt so deeply
But it does and I wish I could stop the pain
I dont want you to go
I cant live with out you
Please fight this...dont let it consume you
Please dont ask me to say "goodbye"
Dont ask me to let you die
I cant do that, I cant just stand by
I cant stand by and watch you die
Please dont you see how much you mean to me
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Written by akira
copyright 2002

Akira
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just out of reach
1 posted 2003-01-09 04:43 PM


Very heart wrenching poem akira. Knowing that we are losing someone close to us is always more difficult than words can sometimes express. Chris

"Hope" is the thing with feathers-
that perches in the soul....
                  
                       -Emily Dickinson

Joyce Johnson
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Member Rara Avis
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2 posted 2003-01-09 05:18 PM


I know this pain.  You have expressed it very well.  Joyce
aries_luv_ppl
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since 2001-09-20
Posts 1448
Universal Mind
3 posted 2003-01-09 06:21 PM


Perhaps it is the most depress moment of lives when parents leave us.

P.S check your grammar, "with out" should be "without", "your" should be "you're". And please don't get offend by my critc. I'm just trying to help proof reading it.

Eliza Simmons
~Sometimes when I look back at what I wrote, I don't recognize the 'Me' in the past anymore.

midnightblues
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since 2000-07-01
Posts 1597
Singapore
4 posted 2003-01-10 12:39 PM


Oh akira,

this is so sad, but beautifully expressed. i really like it

Love
Michelle

If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues™

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