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Yu Lan
Senior Member

since 2000-04-13

Posts 1462
New Zealand

0 posted 2002-12-06 06:08 PM

Blue ghosts
and flowing orange invitations;
their passions enflaming wood behind glass
as they seduce
and make love to each other,
in and out of pine.
Teasing, touching,
consuming –
wooden loins crumble
and shiver,
and leave quivering ashes
to sleep.

(Wow, it's been a while since I posted a new poem.. I miss this place!!!)

Hope to spend more time here these hols,
Luv - Lynne

[This message has been edited by Yu Lan (12-06-2002 06:09 PM).]

Magicmystery
Senior Member

since 2002-02-13

Posts 821
Windsor, Ontario, Canada

1 posted 2002-12-06 06:18 PM

Hey Lynne, that one took my breath away.... I could see it fuzzy at first.... but then, I found myself being drawn to the fire, sit right up close on that comfy woven mat and push a stick with fluffy sugar attached thru the opening in the glass and roast it over the flame. Warming on a cold winter day. Do you suppose you'll be serving hot chocolate later? I might stick around here a while.

Great Read!!!

Sherry

Cherish the good memories of the past and look forward to the adventure called Tomorrow. But above all... be kind to yourself today.

Dark Angel
Member Patricius

since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

2 posted 2002-12-06 10:52 PM

I love to sit and watch the fire...

I loved every single line... another fantastic write.

Maree

midnightblues
Senior Member

since 2000-07-01

Posts 1597
Singapore

3 posted 2002-12-07 10:40 AM

Wooo sensual...

Welcome back Lynne! Look forward to your posts *_*

Love
Michelle

If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues™

Denise

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

4 posted 2002-12-07 10:47 AM

This is perfection! Wow!

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

5 posted 2002-12-07 02:14 PM

YuLan~
I felt the warmth ... mesmerized by the embers glowing~

Good to see you back at the friendship fires of Passions' Pub~
We saved you a place~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

Lonestar
Junior Member

since 2002-12-04

Posts 35
Glasgow, Scotland

6 posted 2002-12-07 04:09 PM

I've never been one to write poems like yours! But I loved reading it, shall look out for more of your work

Lonestar

coyote
Senior Member

since 2001-03-17

Posts 1077

7 posted 2002-12-08 09:36 PM

Very sensual write, Lynne.
Laconic verse always warms the heart.

Thanks,
coyote

"The greatest of all faults is to be conscious of none."
Thomas Carlyle

Yu Lan
Senior Member

since 2000-04-13

Posts 1462
New Zealand

8 posted 2002-12-10 12:59 PM

Wow! I didn't expect so many people to reply! Thank you so much!!

Thanks Sherry! - now hot chocolate its something else I LOVE.. mm, creamy, hot, marshmellows and chocolate.. ^^

Maree - Yeah, I've always been a fire-bug.. I love watching the flames. SO I had to write this. Thanks for reading!

Michelle.. mm, but isn't that what cold nights are for? *_^ Thanks!

Denise! my gosh.. hehe, thanks!!!

I'm glad you saved me a spot Marge, because I'm definitely back, and loving it. *Huglets* Oh that's so cute!!

Thanks Lonestar

You're so nice.. I haven't read a lot of your poetry I have to say, but I do remember enjoying much of what I have read

Thanks coyote.. hey what is a "laconic verse"? I've never heard that term before..

Luv,
Lynne

It's nice to share - kiss someone when you have a cold.

bsquirrel

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-01-03

Posts 7855

9 posted 2002-12-10 04:51 PM

Like the flames.

coyote
Senior Member

since 2001-03-17

Posts 1077

10 posted 2002-12-10 09:39 PM

Hi Lynne,

Laconic - To say much with few words.

coyote

juliet_2u
Senior Member

since 2000-07-23

Posts 1125
North Carolina

11 posted 2002-12-11 12:58 PM

Lynne, I found myself staring right into those romantic flames. In looking I saw love and closeness, soft kisses and cuddles. Romance at it's sweetest.
Hugs,
Juls

Yu Lan
Senior Member

since 2000-04-13

Posts 1462
New Zealand

12 posted 2002-12-16 02:43 AM

thanks coyote

cuddles.. isn't that a great word?!! ^^
Thanks Juls, ur 2 sweet.

It's nice to share - kiss someone when you have a cold.

scorpio
Member Ascendant

since 2002-10-02

Posts 5178
right...there

13 posted 2002-12-16 03:29 PM

Next to my beautiful lady...there is nothing more captivating than a wood fire...well written...very creative...please write more..

believe in what your heart feels...

pegasus111
Member Elite

since 2000-07-27

Posts 2219
ocala, fl, usa

14 posted 2002-12-18 02:28 PM

Loved this piece! expertly written. I can feel your passion. Bravo!

the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost

vlraynes
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

15 posted 2002-12-29 05:49 PM

Lynne~
Wow...this is just perfectly beautiful.
I absolutely love this.
Hugs,
~Vicky
"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

Yu Lan
Senior Member

since 2000-04-13

Posts 1462
New Zealand

16 posted 2003-01-01 06:43 PM

Thank you, you 3!! Wow, this feels so great that you appreciate this.. this is a poem I've been meaning to write for a long time, because I've always loved the excitement of the flames, but have never quite been abe to say it the way I wanted to until recently. ^^

Love to all
-Lynne

It's nice to share - kiss someone when you have a cold.

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