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cherrylips
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since 2002-11-30
Posts 51
UK

0 posted 2002-12-04 01:44 PM



I ask you not to leave me here,
Shaken and overcome by fear.
The evil echos through the house,
I feel vunerable and small as if a mouse.

It draws closer and all turns cold,
I have to be strong I have to be bold.
I won't be beaten by the hate inside,
I must rellocate where my confidence resides.

I won't give in I will not quit,
By one mistake I won't stay in this pit.
I need to be free, I need to feel whole,
I need to repair by damaged soul.

Confidence, ambition and drive I lack,
I need your help to bring it back.
I know what I wish,I know what I want,


I need by motivation to return,
Once again I need my candle to burn.
I wish for success, I want my dream.

I will live not in fear,I wont be put off.
Watch out for me ,as here I come.
The battle with you has not yet be lost or won.

* This poem is an attempt to regain my focus, I know it isnt perfect and the end loses its rythm but it came from the heart*

© Copyright 2002 Danielle - All Rights Reserved
midnightblues
Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 1597
Singapore
1 posted 2002-12-05 02:39 PM


Dear cherrylips,

you worry too much girl, this is good truly... it happened to me recently too and I can really relate. so now i'll sit back and wait for your next poem, maybe you'll have overcome your distrss and pen a cheerful one? God bless there're lotsa lovely ppl ard here

Love
Michelle

If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues™

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