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midnightblues
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0 posted 2002-11-11 10:10 AM



You brought me back to God
and pulled me out of ****
You always stood by me
Listened patiently
You believed in me
Helped me find my faith
I believed in life again
Cos you were my God-sent

You are a sweet angel
Just like a child
I give in to you all the time
And you did too
You are one of a kind
Love of my life

And then I realise you tried
To have a giving heart
Tried hard to rid the hate
That for years was eating your heart
But my coaxes and pampering
Didn't help you at all
You hated everybody
And started to tire of me
You were in the comfort bubble
Drifting away from me

I watched you hate the world
Like a wilful child
Hopelessly love you
For both what you are and aren't
I wanted to protect you
From devouring your own heart
I prayed everyday
For you and me
I asked God to make me strong
So to pull us through

Then He made me see
That your time hasn't come
He wanted me to give up
Cos I wasn't your special one
God wants me to be strong
So I let you go
Oh boy it hurt like hell
But that was for you
And myself

Now I'm so confused
For you are so sweet
Still the wilful child
That I'm hopelessly in love with
You haven't changed abit
Though I know you will one day
But I have to move on
I have to be strong

One day I'll have to see
you with your special girl
It'll hurt like hell I know
But then I can truly let go

We knew there was something goin on
The feelings were so strong
Do you still feel it?
I know I do
I really do

Starry eyed I fell for you
You said you loved me too
that was the sweetest thing
I had ever knew

Thank you for the memories
Thank God for you
Thank you for being you
I love you

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Anyone??? This is my love story ...
After so long ... hope that you guys'll like it
God bless

Love
Michelle

If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues™

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Midnitesun
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1 posted 2002-11-11 11:42 AM


I like your love story. It shows great strength of character on your part, as well as unconditional love and compassion.
Well done, Michelle.

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2 posted 2002-11-11 01:28 PM


Too bad for him that he wasn't ready, but with your sweetness the lucky one will come along.  Love, Joyce
Denise
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3 posted 2002-11-11 04:05 PM


It's always healthy to see the good and the bad in a relationship that has ended not as we had hoped. Everything can be a learning experience.
dr tung
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4 posted 2003-05-22 12:54 PM


hey michelle,

my heart is stirred as i read this... don't know what to say, but glad that u have found God...

AL

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5 posted 2003-05-22 04:26 PM


Michelle:  Someday you will find the one your are supposed to be with. I know it must have hurt and probably still does, but
you learned how strong you could be!

Betty Lou Hebert

midnightblues
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since 2000-07-01
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Singapore
6 posted 2003-05-23 11:49 AM


And yes i'm still in the recovering stage... in fact am coping quite well ^_^
God is my shepherd, I shall not want...


Love
Michelle

If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues™

passing shadows
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7 posted 2003-05-25 01:13 AM


good outlook!
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