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WhiteRose
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0 posted 2002-11-10 06:40 PM



I've added butterflies to the desk
to flutter as I type, in a somewhat
inanimate sort of way, stuck there
to the wood in a forever frozen pose.

Blue and red beauties that I'm sure
never flew on wing to anywhere
except here, amongst the treasures
of my life in sad display.

Yet they bring a sense of flight
simply with presence of wing, and
span, there, captured with artists
brush, still life of lacey movement.

They take me out of this small room in
mind. Travelling as fantasy of thought,
into lightest air I am set free
upon the flutter of butterfly wings.

WhiteRose 11/10/02

"my reflection becomes me"

© Copyright 2002 Anne Thompson - All Rights Reserved
Dark Angel
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1 posted 2002-11-10 07:49 PM


Butterflies are so beautiful... and so is your poem


Maree

Denise
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2 posted 2002-11-10 08:42 PM


Lovely, WhiteRose!
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3 posted 2002-11-11 12:34 PM


Your butterflies are inspiring.  Lovely thoughts.  Joyce
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4 posted 2002-11-11 08:06 AM


WhiteRose~
Oh my gosh ... I love this~
Just the idea of flightful-flutter makes me smile at where those wings can take your thoughts~

Fantasmatical idea~
It's so nice to see you in the Corner Pub~
Great place to be~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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WhiteRose
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5 posted 2002-11-11 07:50 PM


Maree, I find them poetically inspiring. Thanks so much for reading.

Thank you Denise.

Thanks so much Joyce, I'm glad you enjoyed.

Thanks Marge, I like the warm atmosphere over here.

vlraynes
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6 posted 2002-11-15 01:32 AM



WhiteRose~
This is beautifully penned.
I enjoyed it muchly.
~Vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

BloomingRose
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7 posted 2002-11-15 06:37 AM


Butterflies are lovely and carefree little creatures. They are delightful, and so is your poem!

Deb

WhiteRose
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8 posted 2002-11-16 09:42 PM


Thank you Vicky for reading and responding.

Thanks Deb, your comments mean a lot.

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