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ellie LeJeune
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0 posted 2001-06-07 06:58 AM


I am hidden here
neath Your wings of Graceful Love
home and safe at last

A friend hears the song in my heart, and sings it to me when my memory fails.

© Copyright 2001 ellie LeJeune - All Rights Reserved
deleeme
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1 posted 2001-06-07 04:43 PM


Of a more blest place
In vain, some may seek to find
This is best of all!

Great senyru, friend-and reports of a marvelous find!  Never Vacate!!!
         David

No Better Place do I know
Than where Hearts knit as
one,
For in that grand
experience,
The Better ALL become.

God Bless us All!!!

2dalimit
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2 posted 2001-06-08 05:17 AM


Thanks for the pleasant feeling this morning.
Melton

Songbird
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Missouri
3 posted 2001-06-08 06:27 PM


No safer place..and no other home like that.
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4 posted 2001-06-08 06:41 PM


lovely.  Joyce
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5 posted 2001-06-09 06:13 PM


Very comforting the home is, right?
I felt this one.
Great job!

Denise
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6 posted 2001-06-10 04:40 PM


Lovely, again!
kitkat
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7 posted 2001-06-12 10:47 AM


Oh this made me feel warm too...I enjoy reading your haiku and senyrus..
Red_Feather
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The Vagabond Sea
8 posted 2001-06-12 11:31 PM


It is wonderful when another person feels like home, no matter where you both may roam. I liked this very much.

One's not half two it's two are halves of one EE Cummings

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singapore
9 posted 2001-06-24 01:06 PM


great thoughts here!!
Moon Dust
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10 posted 2001-06-24 08:47 PM


This is peaceful and warm I like it

Don't ever give in, if you do you've lost everything you've ever had and everything you hope to gain, but if you carry on your already winning.


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