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Trillium
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0 posted 2002-10-26 02:40 PM






As Seasons Change

When winter spreads its cloak of white
And graces every moonlit night,
With silvered beauty and each sound
Is magnified, my joys abound!
I love to see each bush and tree
All turned to frosty filigree.
I love to walk in crunchy snow
And watch the trails of ice spume blow
From off the mountain tops that rise,
Like mounds of ice cream, in the skies.

Then when it's spring, my pleasure grows,
Enjoying everything that shows
It has returned from winter's fast,
To green and bloom, as in the past.
First flowers fill me with delight.
Each one a sweet and treasured sight.
I long for spring to stay but soon,
The calendar says it is June.
It seems this month just hurries by.
Wild roses help me say good-bye!

The summer sets a faster pace,
For every week there is a race
To do the things that must be done
And still have time to soak up sun.
Bright autumn enters with panache
And gives the trees a little dash
Of colored leaves, to show that she
Intends to paint, most lavishly!
As her finale dies away,
I wish on stars that she would stay,
But seasons change, and people too.
It's time for winter to debut!



Betty Lou Hebert



Published by Drury's Publishing, "Best Poets of 2000",

[This message has been edited by Trillium (10-26-2002 02:43 PM).]

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Marge Tindal
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1 posted 2002-10-26 02:52 PM


BettyLou~
You are so *gifted* with lovely thoughts~
Thank you for sharing ... this is exquisite~

I LOVE THIS -
'frosty filigree'

Delicate beauty here~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

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2 posted 2002-10-26 03:27 PM


This is a thrilling description of how the seasons hurry by before we have fully had time to appreciate them.. But nice to know that the one following is just as lovely in its own way.  Well done.  Joyce
A. L. Becker
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3 posted 2002-10-26 09:00 PM


dear Betty Lou, your capture so much of the seasons' beauty in your lovely poems. it is a joy to read your work.

"Oh, do not ask, 'What is it?'
Let us go and make our visit."
-Eliot

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4 posted 2002-10-26 10:52 PM


betty lou

well struck my friend
i enjoyed it to the end.
such wizardry with words.

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5 posted 2002-10-26 11:04 PM


Dear Marge:  Thank you for your nice remarks. It's always a treat to hear from you!

Betty Lou Hebert

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6 posted 2002-10-26 11:05 PM


Joyce:  Thanks for your compliments!  I'm glad to hear you enjoyed the poem.

Betty Lou Hebert

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7 posted 2002-10-27 01:28 PM


A. L. Becker:  Thanks for your comments. You are always so complimentary!

Betty Lou Hebert

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8 posted 2002-10-27 01:29 PM


Soaring Eagle:  Appreciate your comments, always! Thanks.

Betty Lou Hebert

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