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Trillium
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0 posted 2002-09-29 05:11 PM







An Afternoon Away

I spent an afternoon away,
Deep in the woods, behind our place.
I lay on grass so soft and green,
Watched nodding heads of Queen Anne's Lace
Bow gently to a passing breeze
And pressed sweet blossoms to my face.
I watched the clouds pass overhead,
Enjoying so, my fragrant bed.

I listened to the songs of birds
And followed them from tree to tree.
I marveled at their feathered frames
And music that enchanted me,
Until I lost all track of time,
Nor thought about where I should be
And when the day grew dim and cool,
Reluctantly, I turned to go.
The shadowed pathway stretched ahead,
Back to the home I love and know.
Back to the camaraderie,
The firelight and candle-glow.



Published in Rhyme Time Magazine 1994

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Joyce Johnson
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1 posted 2002-09-29 05:40 PM


How pleasant to spend an hour or two away all the time knowing home was waiting with its love and comfort.  Lovely, Betty. Joyce
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2 posted 2002-09-29 08:08 PM


  how very lovely betty
so nice to get away to dream
and be able to return home
to dream again.......

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3 posted 2002-09-29 08:31 PM


Trillium...

more people should take the time to take an afternoon away and enjoy the wonders of
nature.

Best

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4 posted 2002-09-29 10:10 PM


Joyce:  Thanks for your nice comments.  I don't know why I don't do this more often. The woods are right at hand and yet if I go out there just to relax and get away awhile, it's not more than a handful of times a year.

Betty Lou Hebert

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5 posted 2002-09-29 10:11 PM


Soaring Eagle:  Thanks for reading and commenting.  Nature is so healing and it's always a pleasure to spend some time in the outdoors.

Betty Lou Hebert

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6 posted 2002-09-29 10:12 PM


BestGirl911:  Thanks for commenting.  I appreciate it.

Betty Lou Hebert

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7 posted 2002-09-29 10:39 PM


Trillium, I loved this. I love to spend the day out in the woods. Thanks for sharing.  
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8 posted 2002-09-30 06:34 AM


Thanks for sharing one of your happy places.

Melton

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9 posted 2002-09-30 01:05 PM


CHILI:  Thanks for commenting and glad you enjoy the woods, as I do.

Betty Lou Hebert

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10 posted 2002-09-30 01:07 PM


Melton:  Thanks for commenting.  I'm sharing a special place with very special people here on PIP.

Betty Lou Hebert

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11 posted 2002-09-30 03:24 PM


very nice Betty. Playing hookey from the world can be such fun...

the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost



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12 posted 2002-09-30 05:59 PM


What a delightful way to spend your time, Betty...I love it! Hugs, Ellie

A friend hears the song in my heart, and sings it to me when my memory fails.

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13 posted 2002-10-01 07:15 PM


pegasus111:  You're right and it doesn't happen nearly often enough, at least for me.

Betty Lou Hebert

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14 posted 2002-10-01 07:15 PM


ellie:  Thanks and glad you enjoyed!

Betty Lou Hebert

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15 posted 2002-11-30 03:06 PM



Betty~
This is such a lovely piece and has such a calming feel to it.
I truly enjoyed every word of this.
Hugs,
~Vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

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16 posted 2002-11-30 04:49 PM


Vicky:  I'm glad you liked this and found it soothing.

Betty Lou Hebert

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