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0 posted 2002-09-05 05:20 PM






Red Leaves

I know it's autumn when I see
The changes in our maple tree.
The mass of leaves, in darkest green
Are switching color and I've seen
So many shades of rose and red.
Of orange and crimson.How I dread
The day that they begin to fall.
To lie in piles along the wall.
For that means autumn's at an end
And winter's just around the bend!



Betty Lou Hebert

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1 posted 2002-09-05 08:30 PM


Pretty poem Betty and there isn't a thing we can do about it, Autumn comes.  Joyce
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2 posted 2002-09-05 11:49 PM


Joyce:  Thanks.  I don't want to stop autumn, which I love, but sure wish I could do something about winter, which I don't!

Betty Lou Hebert

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3 posted 2002-09-06 04:27 AM


Trillium, where i live we dont really have a true autumn, so this poem calls to my mind an imagined romantic autumn that i've rarely seen.  the autumn of charlie brown cartoons.  very nice.

Annie :-

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4 posted 2002-09-06 09:50 AM


Betty, this is a great poem.
I am happy for autumn but the change in color for us means

raking, raking, raking.

We have a huge maple in the backyard.

Hugs, Marti

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5 posted 2002-09-06 05:40 PM


A. L. Becker:  Thanks for your response.  Glad you liked the poem.  I lived in Nevada for awhile and missed the colorful change of season, when autumn appears.

Betty Lou Hebert

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6 posted 2002-09-06 05:43 PM


Marti:  Thanks for commenting.  We love our big maple tree too. My husband usually picks up the leaves a little at a time, with the bagger and then we use them to cover other plants.  We lost 1/3 of it to an ice storm in 1996 and wondered if it would survive, but it has made an amazing come back.

Betty Lou Hebert

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7 posted 2002-09-06 08:58 PM


Betty, a lovely poem.

Battle not with monsters lest ye become a monster, and if you gaze into the abyss, the abyss gazes also into you. - Friedrich W. Nietzsche

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8 posted 2002-09-07 12:09 PM


Brian:  Thank you for reading and for the nice comment.

Betty Lou Hebert

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9 posted 2002-09-07 09:12 AM


you do wonders with images Betty. Great read.

the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost



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10 posted 2002-09-07 02:38 PM


pegasus111:  Thank you so much for the nice compliment!

Betty Lou Hebert

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