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WhiteRose
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0 posted 2002-07-25 03:48 PM



Quiet..

the dawn breaks
with pale blue movements

the sun bursts
with yellow streams of light

the animals arise
with voices to greet the day

from the porch
my lazy perch
I watch awaken
sleeping earth.

WhiteRose

[This message has been edited by WhiteRose (07-25-2002 09:49 PM).]

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Purple Poet On Wheels
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1 posted 2002-07-25 07:51 PM


cool and simple
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2 posted 2002-07-25 09:32 PM


Pretty White Rose, but oh how I had to strain to read part of it against that blue background.  Joyce
WhiteRose
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3 posted 2002-07-25 09:55 PM


I changed the colors. I hope that's a little better. :-)
laryalee2
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4 posted 2002-07-25 11:32 PM


Truly beautiful!

Lary


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5 posted 2002-07-26 03:38 AM


yea...simple but cool poem....and yea...you really do have to love the addition of color...
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