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LarBear
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Kingston, New York

0 posted 2000-06-28 05:21 PM


The Pain feels so great
   In my heart
    A love that can not wait
      A Love with restrictions

Tears fall; one is too many
   In my soul
    A love that sits silently
      A Love with real intentions

Emotions go without reason
   In my body
    A love that is in question
      A love with many dangers

The misery I cannot believe
    In my mind
     A love in desperate need
       A love circled in depression

Wanting you, I can not have
    In my spirit
     A love without embrace
         A love deprived of aspiration

Married, but love another
    In my everything
      A love that somehow happened
         A love that is forbidden


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Elizabeth
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1 posted 2000-06-28 05:43 PM


This just seems to throb with the pain, LarBear...

Elizabeth


I'm grabbing my hat and coat
I'm leaving the cat a note
Quick call me a ferry boat-getting out of town!



Dawn Eclipse
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2 posted 2000-06-28 05:52 PM


Wow... I can feel your pain... No one should have to go through that... unfortunately, it happens way too often.  keep your chin up.     Great poem.  

"The universe is full of magical things patiently waiting for our wits to grow sharper."
Eden Phillpotts
*Cassandra Roseen*

LarBear
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3 posted 2000-06-29 12:21 PM


Thanks for the comments:

Its tragic to hold on to a lie, one with pain, one in shame. This is about that love. Love of a kind that is better left alone.

Love Keeps the World Smiling

LarBear

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