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kat
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since 2000-05-20
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0 posted 2000-06-28 01:00 PM


Mmmm  What A Treat

So smooth and creamy
So utterly dreamy
Nothing can compete
With this delectable treat

I smooth it with my lip
Catching every drip
Open my mouth real wide
I run my lips around the side

Not leaving anything to waste
I just love the taste
Sometimes it gets a little messy
But a girl like me is not that fussy

Around the rim my tongue I do run
Sucking and licking, this is so much fun
I roll my eyes as I take everything in
Because wasting even a drop would be a sin

Now I’ve got to admit I get carried away
And I surely can’t have this every day
But sometimes I do, I take it to extreme
When I sit with my lover
And share the same
Wonderful
Vanilla Ice Cream



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Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554

1 posted 2000-06-28 02:03 PM


Well I KNEW exactly what you were talking about   LOL...
and yes  mmmmmmmm
vanilla is my fav too ...
cute and fun poem kat ...
tasty indeed ...
perfect for summer heat  
jm

you can say baby
baby can I hold you tonite
maybe if I said the right words
at the right time
you'd be mine
baby can I hold you tonite

Tracy C

insect
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since 2000-04-22
Posts 1014

2 posted 2000-06-28 02:04 PM


Mmmmmmmmm!!
May I have some? PLEASE!!
I'm gonna need it just to cool down!


SpitFire
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since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396

3 posted 2000-06-28 02:20 PM


~Kat,...you kill me. Haha....this is awesome.  "Cool" work you've done. Take care now and save some for the rest of us. *Peace.
MysticalNights
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since 2000-05-17
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Oklahoma
4 posted 2000-06-28 02:56 PM


WOW!!  This is certainly different than what you have been posting lately.  A wonderful change.  Good to see a good mood!!  Great work!!

A Dream is a Wish the Heart Makes...

kat
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since 2000-05-20
Posts 387

5 posted 2000-06-28 03:33 PM


Janet:  Well ofcourse you knew what I was talking about, I mean I made it so obvious didn't I? I mean what else can it be but ice cream right? LOL. I'm glad you found it fun. Thanks!


Insect:  Oh insect, sure you can. Is the temperature hot overthere also? Wow! It must be one of those real hot summers huh..lol.


SpitFire:  Kill you? My whatever do you mean?  Oh I get it! You didn't know that I loved vanilla ice cream so much. That's what it is. Well I do and if it's your favorite flavor I'll make sure that you don't miss out.  Wow! It must be a big treat with alot I see.LOL.   Thanks! Hmmmm..I better go and see if I can find you some ice cream.



kat

kat
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6 posted 2000-06-28 04:02 PM


MysticalNights:  I figured, Hey! Alot of sad poems so why not have fun with something a little different..lol.  


kat

serenity blaze
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7 posted 2000-06-28 07:53 PM


kat---you took me by surprise with this one...my goodness...this was fun..and by the way...French Vanilla is my favorite too...
kat
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since 2000-05-20
Posts 387

8 posted 2000-06-28 10:01 PM


serenity, I'm glad you had fun with it. Yes, french vanilla is great.  

kat

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