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What's Destined In Your Eyes ( A Timeless Love Story )
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What's Destined In Your Eyes ( A Timeless Love Story ) |
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Dr.Moose1 Member Elite
since 1999-09-05
Posts 3448Bewilderment , USA |
Tumultous on occasion or as calm as sun on leaves This riotous elation gives me reason to believe That in some distant present as I gaze back on the past I may not have known enough of love though I'm learning real fast Complex in simplicity focused not as two Expecting both of us to be as one to muddle through And somehow stay the course of time reflected in our eyes The knowledge we would perish were it to be otherwise The give and take of daily life intrudes not to our core We have trothed unto each other spoken words of evermore As fades the flesh's endurance and resistance by degrees My love for you will true exist for countless centuries And as in some long past present when I gaze into your eyes I know I would soon perish were it to be otherwise |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Doc, this is a most loveing poignant song to lasting love...so beautifully rendered! |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
"As fades the flesh's endurance and resistance by degrees My love for you will true exist for countless centuries And as in some long past present when I gaze into your eyes I know I would soon perish were it to be otherwise" Doc, this has such a classic quality...I really enjoyed this piece and the tender sentiment of its message. ~ Claire Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant?......Henry David Thoreau |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
A refreshing idealistic view of eternal love. Just hope that reality doesn't come between the pair in the poem. Very lovely words. jamie Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil. "Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely". |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is breathtakingly romantic, Dr. Moose! I love it!  Denise |
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Andrew Scott Member Elite
since 1999-06-24
Posts 2558Redlands,CA,USA |
Smooooth Doc... very smooooth. I think I'm going to have to keep an eye on you to make sure you stay away from Red.  Back to the top you go for everyone else to see. |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Round and round and round agin'...  |
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Dr.Moose1 Member Elite
since 1999-09-05
Posts 3448Bewilderment , USA |
Why thank you Nan ! I eagerly await your next post. Doc |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Moose~ You're not wrong this is surely a timeless love story alright. Way to go, I thought this was fantastic Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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