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Aimster
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since 2000-02-19
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0 posted 2000-06-11 09:14 PM


Caroline
Amy M. Kennedy
~this is to my daughter to be. no i am not pregnant lol
nor have any intentions for quite some time.~

you haven't been born yet...but you have a name
in my heart my love for you...grows like a flower
and once you touch my life...I'll never be the same
all my love...onto you i will shower

you are thought of even now...in my heart
and when the time is right...you will be born
and on that fateful day...you will be given a start
perhaps late in the evening, or one early morn

if it should come to pass, that you are a boy
i will love you nonetheless, oh just the sheer joy
and love you completely, not partly
name you after my dad...my little Charlie.
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 "Don't be dismayed at goodbyes. A farewell is before you can meet again. And meeting again after a moment or a lifetime is certain for those who are friends."

"Fate exists but it can only take you so far,
Because once you're there
It's up to you to make it happen."





[This message has been edited by Aimster (edited 06-11-2000).]

© Copyright 2000 Amy Kennedy - All Rights Reserved
Butterflies_dont_cry
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since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733
Michigan
1 posted 2000-06-11 11:25 PM


Amy~
This is so precious, you will be a remarkable
mother, after the way I have heard you speak of your own mother I know that you have been taught by the best, so how can you not be.
Thank you for sharing this piece of your heart with us~

ParisGrl
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since 2000-06-01
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2 posted 2000-06-11 11:39 PM


Amy,

this is a cute, sweet poem.  i'm sure you will make a wonderful mother one day.  )

~PG~

tracie66
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since 2000-01-18
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Australia
3 posted 2000-06-12 12:33 PM


Aim~
What a tender, loving piece of poetry you have written in this. I'm sure too that you will make a wonderful mother one day when the time is right and I wish you will in the future.
Love Tracie~


 Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe



poetFemmeFatale
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4 posted 2000-06-12 01:26 AM


Smiling really big at "Charlie"....LOL  Girl, this is really really something.  What a wonderful thing to do - write a poem for a child not yet here.  Wow, this is breathtakingly divine!  I like this alot!  Such a warm and creative way to show your love.
Aimster
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since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297
Charlotte, NC
5 posted 2000-06-12 10:20 AM


~PFF
coming from such a talented poetress
such as yourself, your compliment blew
me away. i humbly thank you!!  
take care.
amy


 "Don't be dismayed at goodbyes. A farewell is before you can meet again. And meeting again after a moment or a lifetime is certain for those who are friends."

"Fate exists but it can only take you so far,
Because once you're there
It's up to you to make it happen."




brian madden
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since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374
ireland
6 posted 2000-06-12 02:53 PM


Aw a wonderful poem. I can't imagine children at the moment in my life but some day I like to be a father. Beautiful poem, with thoughts and a heart like that your child Caroline or Charlie will be good hands.


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"Take nothing but pictures. Leave nothing but footprints. Kill nothing but time".

Baltimore Grotto

"To be nobody-but-yourself-in a world which is doing its best night and day, to make you everybody else - means to fight the hardest battle which any human being can fight; and never stop fighting."

E.E Cummings.

manic street preachers
"Culture Alienation Borebom and Despair"

"I know I believe in nothing but it is my nothing" -faster MSP

"And you see, I kind of shiver to conformity
Did you see, the way I cower to authority, you see
And my life, it's a series of compromises anyway
It's a sham, and I'm conditioned to accept it all, you see" six by Paul Draper.

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SpitFire
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since 2000-04-19
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7 posted 2000-06-12 04:45 PM


~This is so sweet.  You really outta save it in some sort of scrap book to show to your child when he/she is old enough to see and appreciate your overwhelming love and anticipation even before he/she were born. Lovely piece. Take care.
JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
8 posted 2000-06-12 04:52 PM


Blessed precious little baby to have so much love waiting and a beautiful poem also.  James
lorilockheart
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since 2000-05-06
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9 posted 2000-06-12 07:49 PM


Oh, Amy I love this.  I too am thinking about getting pregnant - maybe sometime soon.
Thanks for this.
Lori

 ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
I hope you still feel small when you stand beside the ocean. Whenever one door closes I hope one more opens. Promise me you'll give faith a fighting chance. And when you get the choice to sit it out or dance - I hope you dance.
song by LeeAnn Womack
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lorilockheart
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since 2000-05-06
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10 posted 2000-06-12 07:49 PM


Oh, Amy I love this.  I too am thinking about getting pregnant - maybe sometime soon.
Thanks for this.
Lori

 ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
I hope you still feel small when you stand beside the ocean. Whenever one door closes I hope one more opens. Promise me you'll give faith a fighting chance. And when you get the choice to sit it out or dance - I hope you dance.
song by LeeAnn Womack
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

lorilockheart
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since 2000-05-06
Posts 206
Alabama
11 posted 2000-06-12 07:50 PM


Oh, Amy I love this.  I too am thinking about getting pregnant - maybe sometime soon.
Thanks for this.
Lori

 ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
I hope you still feel small when you stand beside the ocean. Whenever one door closes I hope one more opens. Promise me you'll give faith a fighting chance. And when you get the choice to sit it out or dance - I hope you dance.
song by LeeAnn Womack
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Denise
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Posts 22648

12 posted 2000-06-12 10:11 PM


This is so beautiful, Amy! Caroline is the name of my oldest! It's one of my favorite names!  

Denise

Aimster
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since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297
Charlotte, NC
13 posted 2000-06-12 10:18 PM


thanks for your sweet replies! you
guys always make me SMILE! thank you.

take care
love ya,
amy

p.s. denise another coincidence huh..lord
this is getting scary lol.  


 "Don't be dismayed at goodbyes. A farewell is before you can meet again. And meeting again after a moment or a lifetime is certain for those who are friends."

"Fate exists but it can only take you so far,
Because once you're there
It's up to you to make it happen."




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