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Nikkisweet
Member

since 2000-02-14

Posts 183
Tx, Dallas

0 posted 2000-06-11 07:59 PM

This one tear
Is for you
I hope you love again
And that I do too

This one tear
Shows no happiness
It prepares us both
For the lonlieness

This one tear
Flows down my cheek
It represents the love that
We both seek

This one tear
Will dry up fast
And when we meet again
This tear will only be the past

Rosebud1229
Senior Member

since 2000-04-05

Posts 1813
North Carolina

1 posted 2000-06-11 08:13 PM

one tear was very beautiful

This one tear
will dry up fast
and when we meet again
this tear will only be the past

very nice enjoyed the flow was so easy

Lone Wolf
Member Ascendant

since 2000-03-16

Posts 5842
Lansing, MI USA

2 posted 2000-06-11 08:29 PM

Nikki,

That one tear had quite a journey. Your words flowed as easily as I am sure that tear did. Great writing. Nice description.

Lone Wolf

Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end.
--Michael W. Smith

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

3 posted 2000-06-11 08:42 PM

Nikki~
What a lovely description
of a tear that has run it's course.
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

4 posted 2000-06-11 08:45 PM

You have captured the moment and the sadness of our tears. James

Aimster
Member Elite

since 2000-02-19

Posts 4297
Charlotte, NC

5 posted 2000-06-11 09:16 PM

~nikki

oh this is so lovely and yet
so sad. you have captured the
essence of a tear perfectly.
beautiful poem.
take care.
amy

"Don't be dismayed at goodbyes. A farewell is before you can meet again. And meeting again after a moment or a lifetime is certain for those who are friends."

"Fate exists but it can only take you so far,
Because once you're there
It's up to you to make it happen."

JulieAnn
Senior Member

since 2000-06-12

Posts 754
Earth 3rd Rock from the sun!!

6 posted 2000-06-12 11:42 PM

Very nice poem....I hope the tears can meet again...good work...

tracie66
Member Elite

since 2000-01-18

Posts 4713
Australia

7 posted 2000-06-19 07:02 AM

Nikki~
Your poem...~This one Tear~ is absolutely beautiful.
Well written little one

Tracie~

Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe

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