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The hurt I try to hide
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The hurt I try to hide |
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Silent soul Member
since 2000-06-10
Posts 73tx,usa |
Here's my other one called "The hurt I try to hide" I cant explain how I feel I just wanna think none of its real But everyday is the same and there's no one to blame somedays my life goes good and well other times it's a living hell I try to hide it whats the use in people asking "What's wrong?" "Are you okay?" just leave me bein and go away if I wanted to share dont you think I would have done it then and there bye 4 now silent [This message has been edited by Silent soul (edited 06-11-2000).] |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Silent Soul, I think we all feel this way at one time or another. It may help if you shared it with someone. The weight of it all is not so tremendous then. Very deep. Nice writing. Lone Wolf Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end. --Michael W. Smith |
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Rosebud1229 Senior Member
since 2000-04-05
Posts 1813North Carolina |
I completely understand your view, I myself am the same way. Of course in time it is good to open up. I know it's good for me to have my time to think things out before everyone wants to give advice. Thank you for sharing. Poetry is healing to our souls and hearts. |
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Silent soul Member
since 2000-06-10
Posts 73tx,usa |
thank ya'll for the replys i dont always feel bad its just sometimes plus being a teenager isnt making it any easier with parents school and other daily things of teens well bye for now Silent (read my other poem "crystal ball" |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
I feel like this too...and when the time is right and when I find the right person and within my terms I will share my hurt and I have many times and it is very soothing and cleansing to let it all out into the open. James |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
Can relate to this....I like it!!  Bridgette "Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown |
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Silent soul Member
since 2000-06-10
Posts 73tx,usa |
Thanks a bunch for the replys Silent |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
I think there's a lot of pressure on teens now days and it's hard to cope. But one thing I have always found is that to write down on paper your feelings and try to make them come alive is as good a therapy as any. Just making those words live so others can appreciate them is a thrill to the soul. This is one of the main reasons people fellowship through this literary outlet. Keep up the writing - Great start! |
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Silent soul Member
since 2000-06-10
Posts 73tx,usa |
yep thats for sure thanks for replying silent |
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JulieAnn Senior Member
since 2000-06-12
Posts 754Earth 3rd Rock from the sun!! |
Oh Silent this one I can relate to all too well. When someone asks me what is wrong I ask them "why do you ask?" That usually shuts them up......but I have been there...I wear my emotions on my sleave as do most poets....chin up, you write very well!!  Julie :) |
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Silent soul Member
since 2000-06-10
Posts 73tx,usa |
Why thanks i like it here everyone is so nice people you can also tell me if you dont like it and try to help make it betterif ya want i dont care bye 4 now Silent ps more of my poems are out my two web sites http://communities.msn.com/Ashleyshomeawayfromhome you have to join that one or http://soulofdarkness.homepage.com bye again |
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