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eyesplus2
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0 posted 2000-06-26 02:40 AM


A package just for you

Wrapped in a smile as big as the sky

Colored with a sparkle in a look of the eye

A blush of red with a touch

Its easy if you try

Tied with a string of love that has no end

This package is yours again and again

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star216
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since 2000-06-26
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1 posted 2000-06-26 02:58 AM


I like it. I thought it was very sweet and sentimental.


CocoBaci
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since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043

2 posted 2000-06-26 03:23 AM


Oh this is soooo cute really pleasant to read

likeavirgin
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since 2000-04-14
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3 posted 2000-06-26 01:12 PM


I like your gifts. I know the heart that sends them.
Sudhir Iyer
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since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943
Mumbai, India : now in Belgium
4 posted 2000-06-26 01:13 PM


A sentimental package indeed!

regards, sudhir

Death, be not proud, though some have called thee,
Mighty and dreadful, for thou art not so;

- John Donne

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