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babyblue
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since 1999-09-16
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0 posted 2000-06-26 02:23 AM


The hurt in love can be so deep,
depper then the disease that kills you
The pain in feeling can make you weep,
even if you can't fall asleep.

Can you hear my pitiful cry,
what if i said i was going to die?
would you respond to me then,
Or should i write it all in pen?

Ink is something that has been lost,
For the world has become total caos.
No need for a pencil full or lead,
If you can type the words from your head.

Please respond if this message is clear,
For all I live is only a year.
Illness form Ads is ashaming,
but all they are doing is the naming.

They called me a slut,
they said i was a hore.
All i got is another closed door,
In life I hope for only one thing,
To tell the one I love it wasen't just
a fling

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