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Brian K
New Member

since 2000-06-25

Posts 2

0 posted 2000-06-25 12:49 PM

Confusion is a soulless thing
It's waves of despair like a blinding rain
It turns and twists my heart affray
With thoughts of you throughout the day

Too much to say in whispered breath
To one so rare, above the rest
A gem so bright to blind these eyes
Such beauty leaves me petrified

To dare and dream of such again
Brings newfound joy to simple men
To know your touch, receive a kiss
Fear of that of which I will miss

For those who choose to dare and play
Should love have such a dangerous way
I wish I wish it could be though
To feel your warmth beneath me so

Elizabeth

Moderator

Member Ascendant

since 1999-06-07

Posts 6871
Minnesota

1 posted 2000-06-25 01:22 PM

Welcome to Passions, Brian! Good work here, too.

Elizabeth

I'm grabbing my hat and coat
I'm leaving the cat a note
Quick call me a ferry boat-getting out of town!

Janet Marie
Member Laureate

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

2 posted 2000-06-25 01:26 PM

Too much to say in whispered breath
To one so rare, above the rest
A gem so bright to blind these eyes
Such beauty leaves me petrified

To dare and dream of such again
Brings newfound joy to simple men
To know your touch, receive a kiss
Fear of that of which I will miss

For those who choose to dare and play
Should love have such a dangerous way
I wish I wish it could be though
To feel your warmth beneath me so

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WOW this is AMAZING
excellent writing and expression
perfect rhyme as well
WELCOME to Passions Brian
so very nice to meet you
I look MOST forward to more of your work
your first post makes an impressive
first impression
take care,
jm

baby dont you work so hard
for this prize you've found,
it will all be gone-when you turn around,
cause nothing lasts forever anyway.
Rick Roberts

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

3 posted 2000-06-25 01:53 PM

BrianK~
Welcome to this family of Passion's.
Nice entrance you've made.
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

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