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My Heart Hears . . .
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My Heart Hears . . . |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
My heart hears . . . the echo of past dreams resounding through the canyon My heart hears . . . his whispering voice guiding me through the valley My heart hears . . . the words he speaks reverberating through my soul My heart hears . . . the sound of his footsteps walking through the scenes of life My heart hears . . . his unwavering support coming through loud and clear My heart hears . . . the wisdom of his words soothing all of my deepest fears My heart hears . . . the sound of his love whispering softly on the wind Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end. --Michael W. Smith |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~ *Whistle*...*Whistle*!!!....deeaamm gurl you are good. hehe. This one rox. It sort of fell onto me like a feather from the sky... kind of floating down softly.....just lovely. *Peace. Talk soon. |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! |
HEY!!!! Lone Wolf, Can you hear the GULP of me swallowing my heart?  This is really beautiful< !signature--> All my love, Jeffrey I lie awake in a world filled with dreams, but dreams can be so real when you don't know you're asleep [This message has been edited by Jeffrey Carter (edited 06-24-2000).] |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
A well expressed poem! I am probably wrong, you are most likely writing about a lover, but for some reason to me, it felt like you were talking about God's love. Truly Beautiful work  Take care, Melissa Honeybee |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
SpitFire . . . *bowing* Thank you my friend. It landed on the page the same way!! Wow...rox? Cool!!! Talk soon, you got it. Jeffrey . . . Yes, I can hear it. Thank you my friend. Flowed like water from the falls from my pen to the paper. Melissa . . . Thanks!! Well, actually it is not about anyone. My fantasy man I guess. I see how you see God in it. Thank you for pointing that out. I like it. Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end. --Michael W. Smith |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
LW, this is really good. . . it's amazing what the heart can hear, if only we'd listen. . . Excellent poem. . . ----------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
LoneWolf~ This is just beautiful and serene. When I sit the Vision Quest of the heritage of my people ... this is the ~spirit~ that walks my way. Lovely, lovely. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Eloise Senior Member
since 1999-11-27
Posts 1096Wyoming |
Lone Wolf, What a lucky heart to hear all of that. Beautifully written. |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
My heart hears . . . the echo of past dreams resounding through the canyon ... My heart hears . . . the sound of his footsteps walking through the scenes of life ... My heart hears . . . the sound of his love whispering softly on the wind --------- Nice work, a great poem Lone Wolf...very nice... regards, sudhir Death, be not proud, though some have called thee, Mighty and dreadful, for thou art not so; - John Donne |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Sven . . . Thank you my friend. It speaks volumes to those who will take the time to listen . . . Marge . . . So happy to help hear that ~spirit~ walking your way. Thank you, your words mean a lot to me. Eloise . . . Yes, it is lucky indeed. The are enchanting sounds. Sudhir . . . Thank you my friend. Thought I would do something different. Glad to see you like. Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end. --Michael W. Smith |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
A very thoughtful piece. It reminded me that to hear, one must first listen....thank you.....jamie |
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Jeremiah Johnson Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223Brooksville, Fl, U.S |
again i love your work i feel this way to sometimes about the girl of my dreams that i have yet to find. well that is a name of one of my poems to "girl from my dreams" well anyway love your piece and keep them coming. I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson- |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
When you listen with your heart you hear much. I like this one alot, great work! God grant me the serenity to accept the people I cannot change, the courage to change the one I can, and the wisdom to know it's me. ~Unknown |
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JP Senior Member
since 1999-05-25
Posts 1343Loomis, CA |
Exquisite  Yesterday is ash, tomorrow is smoke; only today does the fire burn. JP "Everything is your own damn fault, if you are any good." E. Hemmingway |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
This is fantastic Lone Wolf...I have one question though Why haven't you submitted this??? Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Gemini Senior Member
since 1999-12-15
Posts 1203Wisconsin, USA |
Lone Wolf-Very beautiful piece, touches the soul. |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Prometheus . . . We all must listen first, very true. Thank you!! Jeremiah . . . Thank you and some day you will find her when you least expect it. All long as I feel, I will write. Eagle One . . . There is much to hear my friend. Thanks. JP . . . Thanks!! Tracie . . . Don't know why. Just asked myself and decided to!! Thank you!! Gemini . . . Wow, your reply touched my heart. Thank you very much!! Poetry is the spontaneous overflow of powerful feelings: it takes its origin from emotion recollected in tranquility. --William Wordsworth |
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