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Open Poetry #8

you cut off my pigtails

jennie may*
Member

since 2000-06-17

Posts 122

0 posted 2000-06-24 02:05 AM

I never quite
woke up from
your
heartache

the little girl

under my skin

is dead

douglasbailey
Junior Member

since 2000-06-23

Posts 27
Palmerston North, New Zealand

1 posted 2000-06-24 05:12 AM

Ouch!

Lord may I never cause such heartache to anyone.

How do you do that Jennie? Play the right notes to challenge my soul?

Douglas

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

2 posted 2000-06-24 05:20 AM

I don't know how you captured such sadness with such a few short lines but you did. I think you're going to have to let that little girl out sometime. Excellent description of your heart's confined hurt.

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