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Silent soul Member
since 2000-06-10
Posts 73tx,usa |
Heres another one I go through life thinking your not there I go through lifr thinking you dont care I go through life thinking its not fair I go through hours and days of fear Thinking I wanna get away from here I struggle to keep back each tear Im scared of what I see Is this the real me That I forever will be please reply it means alot to me bye 4 now SS |
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Elizabeth
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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
You have painted your hurt very nicely, Silent Soul. Well done. Elizabeth I'm grabbing my hat and coat I'm leaving the cat a note Quick call me a ferry boat-getting out of town! |
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Dawn Eclipse Senior Member
since 2000-01-31
Posts 637The Horsehead Nebula |
Ss, this is a beautiful poem... yet sad.. Keep your chin up, everything will be alright in the end.  "Even a fool knows you can't touch the stars, but it doesn't stop a wise man from trying." Harry Anderson, "Night Court" *Cassandra Roseen* |
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Silent soul Member
since 2000-06-10
Posts 73tx,usa |
thanks for replying bye 4 now Silent |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Sad words and my heart is heavy for you. I send a hug and remind you that in each of us there is a strength that will override and protect us. Beautiful poem. Mark B. |
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Silent soul Member
since 2000-06-10
Posts 73tx,usa |
thanks ss |
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jennie may* Member
since 2000-06-17
Posts 122 |
I wish I could count how many times I've felt that way... truly a beautiful piece- close to home. |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Thought provoking piece.  |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Such sorrowful expressions Silent Soul ... we can each change ourselves and write our own happiness into our lives ... A friend of mine once wrote: "I'd give you a rainbow if I could, but it has to rain first" Always liked that one ...Best wishes and take care, /Kit [This message has been edited by Kit McCallum (edited 06-24-2000).] |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Elizabeth, I understand what you are writing. I was doing the same thing the other day. These are some of the line that appeared on the paper. I wished on Venus and Mars For only a moment to be ours. I wished upon a wishing well. I double bubbled up a spell. I was a sight, I was a knight. I held a candle to the light. I searched my soul the holy grail. I even tried to read some braille. I charged a dragon on the way. Planted roses so I could stay. And in the moment of this throng, I thought I heard you sing a song. It just went on and on. So you see we all go through mental messes. Bless you, be well. Love Sy Forgive the spelling. |
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