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polishflyer
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since 2000-06-23
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0 posted 2000-06-23 02:40 AM



You are my soul my desire and my life.
I love you forever now and later.
I want to die knowing our love will surpass all time.
I love you.
I want to look in your eyes for the joy I bring.
I want to hold your hands and bring them my warmth from with in.
I want to make love to show my real passion for you.
I want to kiss you to show my love is true.
I want to lay next to you while you sleep.
I want to wake next mroning with you by my side.
I want to just love you and hold you until I die.
You deserve the best I can give.
You deserve only to be loved and to live.
You look to see if true love exists.
Baby why do you think after all this time I still persist


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Lonelypoet
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since 2000-05-10
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Conklin,NY,USA
1 posted 2000-06-23 06:11 PM


polishflyer,
Great poem, I think it's abouta wife perhaps or maybe someone very close. Great description of that person.

Lonelypoet
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since 2000-05-10
Posts 123
Conklin,NY,USA
2 posted 2000-06-23 06:13 PM


polishflyer,
Great poem, I think it's abouta wife perhaps or maybe someone very close. Great description of that person.

Poet deVine
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Hurricane Alley
3 posted 2000-06-23 08:51 PM


Welcome to passions!! I look forward to reading more from you! Please check your email for a special message.  
whiskey
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4 posted 2000-06-23 09:24 PM


This is very sweet   I liked it alot, Welcome to passions  
Lone Wolf
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since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842
Lansing, MI USA
5 posted 2000-06-23 09:48 PM


polishflyer,

Wonderful poem.  Great entrance to our family.  Welcome to Passions!!  

I want to find a love like this.

LW


Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end.
--Michael W. Smith


Kit McCallum
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since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774
Ontario, Canada
6 posted 2000-06-23 09:48 PM


"You look to see if true love exists."
Baby why do you think after all this time I still persist"

Wonderful, passionate sentiments Polish Flyer ... well done!  I really loved the closing ... Welcome to Passions!

Best wishes,
/Kit

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