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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA 
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Can you read my mind? Does it always seem to be filled with thoughts of you? Can you touch my heart? Does it always seem to be beating with love for you? Can you hear my soul? Does it always seem to be longing with dreams of you? Can you take my hand? Does it always seem to be outstretched waiting for your touch? Can you touch my cheek? Does it always seem to be ready waiting for your caress? Can you hold my body? Does it always seem to be running waiting for your arms? Can you give me what I long for? Can you give me what I need? You've given me this and so much more That another I'll never need. . . ------------------------------------------------------------------- < !signature--> That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl [This message has been edited by Sven (edited 06-23-2000).] |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Ok Sven, this is the second one of yours, I am reading in as many minutes... and let me tell you that you ask too many questions and darn! they are all so well asked... Then finally you say.... You've given me this and so much more That another I'll never need. . . WOW! C'est Incrediblè... regards, sudhir Death, be not proud, though some have called thee, Mighty and dreadful, for thou art not so; - John Donne |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Oh Sven I love your muse....always so romantic, so touching and tender...keep them coming I love everyone of them  Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
YEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEESSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS I CAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAANNNNNNN LOL LOL love this one Sven gator... love the way you answered your own question. such tender sweet devotion ... lucky muse lucky poet later-romantic-god-gator jm |
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whiskey
since 1999-12-28
Posts 1278Australia |
What a wonderful, beautiful, sweet, all those lovely things rolled into one romantic breathtaking poem I liked it much |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
Sven~ this was awesome! but then again your work always is  . loved thispiece...and looks like janet says yes she can lol hehe. excellentpoem my friend! take care. amy "Don't be dismayed at goodbyes. A farewell is before you can meet again. And meeting again after a moment or a lifetime is certain for those who are friends." "Fate exists but it can only take you so far, Because once you're there It's up to you to make it happen." |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
Lovely, Sven... ~ Claire Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant?......Henry David Thoreau |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
Nice poem.Enjoyed the read!!!!!! |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
I think this one is one of your best. It is very heartfelt and poetry that I can definitely appreciate. Marina It is blessing to have wings for your words, and passion to flow from pen. Marina Crossley |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Sven, Very touching and romantic. Every woman's dream to have such a love. Great writing my friend. LW Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end. --Michael W. Smith |
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Dawn Eclipse Senior Member
since 2000-01-31
Posts 637The Horsehead Nebula |
Sven~ beautiful poem. It seems you have a heart of gold. never lose that! "Even a fool knows you can't touch the stars, but it doesn't stop a wise man from trying." Harry Anderson, "Night Court" *Cassandra Roseen* |
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douglasbailey Junior Member
since 2000-06-23
Posts 27Palmerston North, New Zealand |
I like, I like Douglas |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Oh Sven ... you can make a lady's heart just simply swoon with your sweet and tender lines ... delightfully romantic thoughts, and beautifully expressed! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Thank you all my friends. . . your words mean a lot to me as always. . . thank you again. . . ------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Sevn, So much enjoyed, you are always so romantic, Cerenity |
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